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Challenge #4: All the way to the beginning (Sanzo/Goku)

Apr 11, 2008 22:42

All the way to the beginning

Prompt #4: Opposites

Author: macavitykitsune

Pairings: 39.

Warnings: Sanzo’s Mouth.

Summary: there’s a voice in Goku’s head this time, and the circle’s closing at last.

A/N: overshot the time limit by fifteen minutes on this one, because the bunnies multiplied halfway through.

There was a voice in his head.

At first, he ( Read more... )

author:macavitykitsune, challenge:opposites, pair:goku/sanzo

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macavitykitsune April 12 2008, 17:19:39 UTC

They never stand a chance with Kanzeon. The woman can bulldoze over anyone, even as formidable a creature as Sanzo. ^_^ Goku's way smarter - he just goes with the flow.

baka_gaijin April 12 2008, 13:28:05 UTC

I'm such a sap for anything with Nataku! Thank you so much for posting. Very well done!

macavitykitsune April 12 2008, 17:18:33 UTC

Thanks for the review! ^_^ Nataku's story is so very heartwrenching and I've always wanted to give the poor child a happily ever after. Eating peaches with Goku and probably getting smacked by Sanzo qualifies, I think. ^_^

fujiko1601 April 12 2008, 14:33:04 UTC

I don't know about opposites, but it was a lovely fic. Poor monks have to deal with them both now. :D I wonder if Sanzo put two and two together and realised that it was the war prince they took home.

I don't seize to be amazed how fast you write.

macavitykitsune April 12 2008, 17:16:33 UTC

You know, I think he might have. What with Homura being chronically unable to stfu and all. ^_^ I'm sure he pieced a lot of things together - our Sanzo's dense, but he's not stupid.

Thank you! ^_^

fujiko1601 April 12 2008, 17:26:12 UTC

Oh yeah, Homura. His inability to shut up is one of the reasons I refuse to acknowledge his existence. He babbles all the time about their previous lives and the Sanzo party still knows nothing. Um, what?

despina_moon April 12 2008, 21:08:34 UTC

Well done! Nataku gets out and Sanzo proves once again he's a softy underneath his gruff exterior. This makes me feel good, I want Nataku to find happiness.

Thank you for sharing.

purpleicicles June 20 2008, 16:21:56 UTC

‘Don’t be stupid,’ he said curtly, and reached out to Nataku with his other hand. ‘I’m not leaving you behind.’

‘Wh-what?’ Nataku stammered.

Sanzo jerked his chin at Goku’s limp form. ‘He called you, didn’t he? You’re coming back with us.’

LINE OF WIN!!! I like your method of making STSG's rage subside, especially as it involves Nataku getting a happy ending too!