Challenge # 2 - Unexplored Territory

[erinmacha]

For the challenge time challenge: Unexpected territory. 40 min

Comments

[erinmacha]

Thank you for taking the time to read and commment! Greatly appreciated.

[lillypuff]

A very nice look into a part of Gonou/Hakka's life we don't see written about to often. I guess you could say the fic itself is relatively unexplored territory ;) Great job!

[erinmacha]

Thank you! I meant the unexplored territory to be Gonou touching Kanan's hair, but with the short polish up time, I am not certain how well that came across.

I am happy with the result though. :)

[freeradical9]

This was really sweet. The simple storyline gives the piece a comforting and very homey feel, somehow. This is lovely little cameo of what their early time together might really have been like. Very nice job.

[erinmacha]

Thank you. :) I was taken by surprise when this idea popped into my head for the challenge. I think it turned out okay. :)

[purpleicicles]

Heh, kinda cute and awkward, and bossy!Kanan works really well!! Gonou is such a typical dude... ^_~

[erinmacha]

:P...she would have to be bossy...I think Gonou would take too long thinking everything through if there wasn't someone to push him along.