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For challenge #57, "dawn" -- Darkest Before The

Jun 23, 2009 01:51

Title: Darkest Before The
Author: Claire (rasphigiWarnings: Speculative, takes place after the current events settle down. Spoilers for (semi)recent Reload. Only a bit of swearing ( Read more... )

char:goku, challenge: dawn, author:rasphigi

Comments 14

puddingcat June 23 2009, 08:13:28 UTC

Fabulous :D That's gone straight in my memories!

rasphigi June 23 2009, 08:53:56 UTC

Aw, thank you. :) I'm glad you liked it.

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rasphigi June 23 2009, 17:28:48 UTC

Goku's a darling. I hadn't really tried writing him before, so I'm glad it came through all right for you.
Ikkou dynamics are the fascinating part of the whole series for me... & the idea of what a well-placed punch in the face might solve seemed to fit somehow ;D

Thanks very much!

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rasphigi June 23 2009, 20:47:14 UTC

Well, of course, if there's one thing we know, it's that they won't possibly work it out by ... um... talking to each other and working it out. That would be too ... easy, and boring. Enter the punching. :D
(I love these guys so, so much XXD)

jessiedark June 23 2009, 16:01:58 UTC

wow I love this.

rasphigi June 23 2009, 17:36:24 UTC

♥ Thank you so much.
I really enjoyed writing this. Mostly I think because I want so badly to see something like it happen *cries for ikkou normalcy* I'm glad you enjoyed reading it too :)

kirathaune June 23 2009, 18:15:27 UTC

Oh, I liked this! (And I can see it happening exactly this way, too!)

He was just using that voice that means someone ought to start paying attention quick, before their innards get … out. Loved this line!

He knew exactly what he was doing, he had Sanzo against a wall, and he just wouldn’t let up, til like sparks from a flint Sanzo caught it too. This whole paragraph was cool. It's nice to see that it was Gojyo who snapped them out of their funk.

rasphigi June 23 2009, 20:44:08 UTC

I feel like Gojyo needs a Big Damn Hero moment. He's had a lot of frustration and put up with a lot of reckless shenanigans from the others; I think he's due. Gojyo WIN!
And yeah ... with Hakkai in a mood, I think everyone would want to be careful for their innards' sake. I would.

Thanks so much! I can't wait to read Minekura's version. Bet it won't be near as angsty. :D

clytemnaestra June 24 2009, 03:29:15 UTC

the sun was back

Loved the last line!! :) Well done.

rasphigi June 24 2009, 17:44:56 UTC

Hee, thanks! Couldn't resist that metaphor with this prompt ;)