Compulsion

[saintsalvage]

Compulsion
or, GUNPOINT BLOWJOB
Holmes/Watson, R, 1700 words.
The Prompt, found here: Gun kink. Preferably Holmes angry at Watson for leaving and holding the gun to his temple while taking him violently from behind in the alley outside of their apartment (most likely in some alcohol or drug-induced state). Give me depraved, people! I can take anything

Comments

[featherfish]

QED

Beautiful job with the ending ... much better than the prototype, lol.

Also I did not mention this! But I love the duality in "You are clearly hallucinating." I don't know, it's really simple but I like it.

Also, HOT.

That is all.

[saintsalvage]

QED

Thank you! I thought it could have used more YEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAHHHHHHH. But maybe that is just me.

[featherfish]

Hi, just wanted to say OH MY GOD YOUR ICON. I love that so much.

[avalonauggie]

HOLY SHIT.

that is all I have to say. aside from UNF and GOOD GOD HOLMES and THAT SHOULD NOT HAVE BEEN THAT HOT OH GOD

I will be, as they say, in my bunk.

[saintsalvage]

I definitely felt "this should not be this hot" as I was writing it... so I understand, and I am very glad to hear that you liked it. :D

[aetherious]

So much hotness and tasty angst in this I can barely conceal my grin. I tip my hat to you, good woman.

[saintsalvage]

Thanks. Glad to make you smile!

[kitchensexslave]

Wow... this is so disturbingly hot :S

Brilliant, and I'm glad you went down the angsty marriage route!

[saintsalvage]

I can never resist a good bit of marriage angst. Thanks & glad you liked it!

[medea34]

gun porn AND angst AND fluff. i think i am in love.

[saintsalvage]

Ha ha, oh my, I am glad you liked it.

(Sorry, though: my heart belongs to Dr John GQMF Watson alone.)