Ficlets: from the 100 prompts (070)

Oct 20, 2006 19:53

Title: (070) Storm
who: shura
word count: ~290
disclaimer: because in this audience someone might call my bluff, I'll make no claims of originality here. Kurumada created StS, Toei and others own the rights.

xposted to saintseiyayaoi for the 30^2 themes, and posted one day early because I'm not sure how much computer time not related to work I'll have tomorrow ( Read more... )

art of disclaimers, ghaidin, 100 prompts, drabbles, shura

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undertheice October 21 2006, 00:26:07 UTC
... Oh. Oh. I have no words. This... This is so many things I love together in this wonderful ficlet and my eyes watered and Shura and the master and the thing with the no more stories and hngffhhhh. *falls deep into incoherence*

Excuse me while I read it again.

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undertheice October 21 2006, 00:30:16 UTC
Yep, second time leaves me just as incoherent. This is just too good.

Quotes!
A sea of blood that separated him from the Cloth, making it unreachable.
What a perfect way to describe the moment.

There would be more storms, more nights; but there would never be another story.
Suddenly, the Cloth didn’t seem so important anymore.
Because the ending just... overwhelmed me.

Don't mind me, I'll just be weeping over here. *squishes young Shura*

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ghaidin October 21 2006, 02:20:34 UTC
thank you soooo much!
D, with so much love I should just write Shura!

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undertheice October 21 2006, 10:26:48 UTC
Although I have very much love for your Shura fics, I also love your fics with all the other characters so... don't worry, keep it diverse! I'm sorry, my fangirl side just burst out and there's not much I could do. :x

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ariadnelabys October 21 2006, 12:30:33 UTC
This is a really powerful one. When he falls on his knees and cries, it shows a Shura no one thinks of. He's human after all, and sometimes people just forget that and see him as a heartless giver of justice.

I haven't been able to write about the trials for the gold armours, hehehe, I don't want anyone dead, though I killed Milo's Master's Master, in a story *blush* it was an accident, you know?

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ghaidin October 21 2006, 14:17:51 UTC
He's human after all,
*nods* even if one with spooky hair

it was an accident, you know?
Those are the perils of showing up in fanfiction, you never know when you're gonna get yourself done in.

thanks for commenting, gal. Plus I'm reallyyyyy glad you liked it!

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undertheice October 21 2006, 20:44:26 UTC
even if one with spooky hair
Hair: More dangerous than cosmo.

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ghaidin October 21 2006, 20:45:27 UTC
no kidding, just imagine it gets into your eyes... Shiryu was lucky he didnt get blinded yet damned bloody again when he fought with Shura ;)

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scorpioyue October 22 2006, 16:57:38 UTC
Oh dear. ♥ This, this one has to be my favorite ever from the... 70 ficlets already? *realization dawns on her* Wow, so many! O_O *claps endlessly and throws confetti*

There would never be another story.

Gah. *clings to Shura and clings to your stories for the prompts*

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ghaidin October 22 2006, 17:12:54 UTC
this one has to be my favorite ever from the... 70 ficlets already

*feels very flattered* thanks!
70! I know! I think i'll actually be sad when they're over... plus i only have a few left in the 30^2 themes also :S

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scorpioyue October 22 2006, 17:16:57 UTC
I think i'll actually be sad when they're over.

Well, I've got a solution for that! Have you heard of 31_days? And if you find that not interesting enough, I'll be glad to provide links to more themed comms, as long as we get more fic. *greedy eyes, laughs evilly*

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undertheice October 22 2006, 17:53:50 UTC
And if scorpioyue doesn't provide you enough communities, I have even more!

So don't worry, dear. We'll always have themes to share with you. >:)

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