Loyalty Binds

Jul 30, 2005 19:55

Title : Blood and Fire: Loyalty Binds
Characters : Shura, Kanon
Word count : 2,142
Note : AU, vague angst? Set in "Blood and Fire", a variant universe, and maybe ... oh, six months to a year before the point when the series would start, if this were the canon universe. (I think.)

It's a little hard to explain ... ^_^

In another universe, Kanon was meant to stay in the Cape .. )

shura, fic, kanon, taichara

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taichara August 1 2005, 15:30:49 UTC
Ah, all that was needed for Shura to not be "uncute" was to picture what he would look like if his eyes weren't pinned (a trait with crops up with annoying frequency in anime, imo). *grins*

Don't favor Shiryuu? Hm, seems I may have an ally, although I seem to swing back and forth between "please just die already" and "you were decent once" depending on what portion of the story I'm reading / watching at the time.

(I prefer Blackdragon infinitely more ...)

With any luck Shiryuu will be a little easier to deal with in Blood and Fire. Or at least be a different kind of annoying ^_^

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*chuckles* taichara August 1 2005, 20:52:57 UTC
Sounds rather like we're in the same situation :)

Although there's only one Bronze that really gets under my skin -- and that's Seiya.

*ducks*

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Re: *chuckles* ghaidin August 1 2005, 22:34:04 UTC
Except for the occassional Seiya-devote, I've found that's quite an extended opinion. He's a bit..uni-dimensional. *grins*

And for some reason I never got to comment on this piece of yours. But I'm a faithful member of the community you just created, and it's cuz I'm starting to get addicted to it. :)

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piyomon July 19 2009, 15:19:57 UTC
Reading this has left me feeling claustrophobic and in desperate need of hugs. ;o; (on a more fangirly note though, I have this raging urge to smish Kanon, or send Chall over to feed him freshly cooked pasta. *ahem* Moving on...)

Not that it's a bad thing though (yes, I am slightly claustrophobic), as I feel for Kanon's confinement and his being locked away. For some reason, I see his pale blond hair here as a fleeting metaphor to the barely-there light of cosmo that he has in him, and gives him this whole image of a delicate candle, perilously close to being snuffed out.

The contrast with Shura here -- dark and hesitant -- is quite striking. Is he there to bring light back, be a shadow to bring the light forward; or will he eventually -- or perhaps unknowingly -- extinguish the fragile flame?

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taichara July 19 2009, 15:28:47 UTC
Reading this has left me feeling claustrophobic and in desperate need of hugs. ;o; (on a more fangirly note though, I have this raging urge to smish Kanon, or send Chall over to feed him freshly cooked pasta. *ahem* Moving on...)

*gives much hugs!*

(this Kanon would like the smishes, as long as you didn't spook him. poor thing ...)

Not that it's a bad thing though (yes, I am slightly claustrophobic), as I feel for Kanon's confinement and his being locked away. For some reason, I see his pale blond hair here as a fleeting metaphor to the barely-there light of cosmo that he has in him, and gives him this whole image of a delicate candle, perilously close to being snuffed out.

\o/! That's the sort of imagery I was going for when I wrote it; I'm glad it worked out :3

The contrast with Shura here -- dark and hesitant -- is quite striking. Is he there to bring light back, be a shadow to bring the light forward; or will he eventually -- or perhaps unknowingly -- extinguish the fragile flame?The next few segments I may need to ( ... )

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piyomon July 19 2009, 15:44:47 UTC
>0< *hugs muchly!*

(this Kanon would like the smishes, as long as you didn't spook him. poor thing ...)

*smishes Kanon!* X3

The next few segments I may need to write, I may need to address Kanon on some level ... so I can't comment too much here for you, alas --

Perfectly fine. ;)

*hugs moar! XD*

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