Loyalty Binds

Jul 30, 2005 19:55

Title : Blood and Fire: Loyalty Binds
Characters : Shura, Kanon
Word count : 2,142
Note : AU, vague angst? Set in "Blood and Fire", a variant universe, and maybe ... oh, six months to a year before the point when the series would start, if this were the canon universe. (I think.)

It's a little hard to explain ... ^_^

In another universe, Kanon was meant to stay in the Cape .. )

shura, fic, kanon, taichara

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taichara July 19 2009, 15:28:47 UTC
Reading this has left me feeling claustrophobic and in desperate need of hugs. ;o; (on a more fangirly note though, I have this raging urge to smish Kanon, or send Chall over to feed him freshly cooked pasta. *ahem* Moving on...)

*gives much hugs!*

(this Kanon would like the smishes, as long as you didn't spook him. poor thing ...)

Not that it's a bad thing though (yes, I am slightly claustrophobic), as I feel for Kanon's confinement and his being locked away. For some reason, I see his pale blond hair here as a fleeting metaphor to the barely-there light of cosmo that he has in him, and gives him this whole image of a delicate candle, perilously close to being snuffed out.

\o/! That's the sort of imagery I was going for when I wrote it; I'm glad it worked out :3

The contrast with Shura here -- dark and hesitant -- is quite striking. Is he there to bring light back, be a shadow to bring the light forward; or will he eventually -- or perhaps unknowingly -- extinguish the fragile flame?

The next few segments I may need to write, I may need to address Kanon on some level ... so I can't comment too much here for you, alas --

*more hugs?*

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piyomon July 19 2009, 15:44:47 UTC
>0< *hugs muchly!*

(this Kanon would like the smishes, as long as you didn't spook him. poor thing ...)

*smishes Kanon!* X3

The next few segments I may need to write, I may need to address Kanon on some level ... so I can't comment too much here for you, alas --

Perfectly fine. ;)

*hugs moar! XD*

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