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boblemon in saigo_no_lady

Only Love & Time After Time

May 27, 2011 21:28

Title: Only Love
Rating: PGish
Pairing: Aiba/Ohno
Disclaimer: I guess Johnny’s technically owns Arashi, huh? Not me.
Summary: Aiba was in love before Arashi even existed.
Note: Not betaed. This is for deelovesryo, who donated to the fundraising for Japan drive on arashi_on. Thank you! More not quite drabbles. Also, I don't pretend to know everything that happened ( Read more... )

pairing: aiba/ohno, drabble, fundraising for japan, mild sexiness

Comments 20

mongo_o_o May 27 2011, 13:21:02 UTC

the 1st one is soooo cute!
and i had too read the 2nd one again, cause i got a little confused XDD

boblemon May 27 2011, 13:39:50 UTC

^__^ Thank you!

It's different when you read it the second time, right?

Thanks for reading and commenting!

doctoggy May 27 2011, 14:12:05 UTC

The first is amazingly sweet, and I like how you played up the both emotional while drunk fact. :)

The second was hilarious. :)

boblemon May 28 2011, 02:06:00 UTC

Thank you very much! I guess posting the two of these together highlighted their differences a lot more than posting them separately. ^__^

jellybean6972 May 27 2011, 19:31:26 UTC

Wah~ the first one is so cute and sounds just like Ohba~ X3

As for the second one, I had to read this part...
"In fact, he knew everything about Aiba, to a point where it would have been creepy had he not been his computer.

Well, technically, laptop-the luckiest laptop in the world,..."
...over again! XD
I was like wait a minute~ 0.o
Haha! That's the best! XD

Thanks for sharing! <3

boblemon May 28 2011, 03:20:10 UTC

Ohba is so adorable, right? The first story fit really well, but then again, I'm not sure I could make it longer than this anyway. >_< They are too perfect together!

I'm glad my surprise worked. ^__^ When you read it again it goes from "Aw, cute Ohba!" to "Oh, Aiba's just a pervert." Haha.

Thanks for reading and your comment!

alexxasick May 27 2011, 21:34:28 UTC

XD I laughed so hard with the second one xD

the first one is really cute xD

boblemon May 28 2011, 03:20:55 UTC

I'm glad you laughed! Thanks for reading!

deelovesryo May 28 2011, 15:08:10 UTC

Oooooh! SO SWEET! and I cant believe you took all my prompts for you to choose and joined them to wrote such a coherent and smooth oneshot, really your flow is always the best ( ... )

boblemon May 29 2011, 01:29:23 UTC

Yep I took them all because they all fit together so well. ^__^ I feel like there was a large part skipped in the middle, but at the same time... we all know what happened then, so to speak. And somehow I can't picture Ohno (especially little!Ohno) as anything but nice, and Aiba quick to understand his feelings.

I liked that line too, if only because it's the only actual sexual part seen in the whole thing, haha. When I first heard Sho talking about this scene, I immediately knew that they worked each other up and that's why they ended up crying, and I thought it was so cute, so when you mentioned it I knew I had to include it.

For the second one, I knew it would be a little off, because there is very little interaction between them, but I wondered how it would be read. I hope it didn't just end up being confusing... =A=

Anyway, thanks for your donation and your feedback!! <3