The Wings of My Tears & Like Family

May 15, 2011 21:28

Title: The Wings of My Tears
Rating: PGish
Pairing: Jun/Ohno
Disclaimer: I guess Johnny’s technically owns Arashi, huh? Not me.
Summary: Ohno comes to terms with his past life, his love for Jun, and himself.
Note: Not betaed. This is for iphridian, who donated to the fundraising for Japan drive on arashi_on. Thank you! By the way, these were supposed to be drabbles ( Read more... )

drabble, fundraising for japan, pairing: jun/ohno

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borylovearashi May 15 2011, 14:03:12 UTC
what what happened to Oh-chan please don't tell me he gone T_T
i love it thank you so much honey please can you write more i love it especially Juntoshi and Yamapi x ohno kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
wow omg i am smiling like crazy now i love your fic's your the best fanfiction writer ever i want more of yamapixohno please *_* can i
anyway thanks again honey love you

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boblemon May 15 2011, 14:12:17 UTC
I'll probably write some sort of sequel to this because I knew people would ask for it... We'll see. I need to catch up on everything else too. T.T

Haha, you liked Yamapi/Ohno, huh? Somehow they actually make a cute couple, although I never would have thought of it before.

Thank you for reading! You're always so fast! I'll be sure to write more Juntoshi and maybe some Yamapi/Ohno in the future for you. ^__^

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borylovearashi May 15 2011, 21:59:50 UTC
really your going to do thise for me T_T i am so happy >>> hug you
no need to thank me honey i should the one who thank you thank you so much
i can't wait for Your fic's thank you so much again love you

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jellybean6972 May 15 2011, 14:48:43 UTC
Wah~ the first one was so sweet~ They do get to be together in the next life! X3

I like the second one too! Ohno as a mafia boss, I can really picture that, haha! Sweet and funny mixed with action is a good combination :D

Thanks for sharing!! :D

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boblemon May 16 2011, 01:53:54 UTC
Yes. ^__^ I sort of feel like that story deserves more development, but since it started out as a drabble, didn't get any. Maybe I'll write a few more parts in the future. I'd also really like to throw in the other members, you know?

I can just picture Ohno in a suit that someone else made him wear, not doing anything serious until it absolutely has to be done. >.< But at least he has a lot of people to support him!

Thanks for reading! I'm really happy to hear you liked them!

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helenmaldon May 15 2011, 16:53:14 UTC
OMG I LOVE Ohno as a mafia boss that keeps his family together through...love ^^ Awesome.
But the end!!! What happens to Ohno???
Thanks for sharing!! I liked the action sequences, you wrote them really well! But of course I also enjoyed the mafia paperwork : )

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boblemon May 16 2011, 01:56:02 UTC
That's right, a mafia family held together with love. <3

O: Well, I can't really say it's a secret, but I'm already anticipating writing a sequel, although I have no idea when that will be. ^_^;; The paperwork was sort of a wtf moment when looking back, after the action is over. Haha.

Thanks for reading and commenting!!

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alexxasick May 15 2011, 20:11:21 UTC
you know? I kind of understand why it's the end in both stories.

The first one is so nice, being together after all... and it doesn't seem to have anything missing even if there's no smut in it.

The second one, with Ohno directing his organization out of respect instead of fear, was cool, I can totally picture him like that.

And even if I understand the frustration of the no-ending kind of endings, I actually rather them than the 'happily-ever-after' kind of ending, they make me feel like it was a window or a peephole to another's person life instead of something out of another person's head. ^^

NICE!

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boblemon May 16 2011, 02:01:31 UTC
You're completely right. When I thought up the idea for the first one, it turned into a confrontation instead of a subdued conversation and that's why they had sex, lol. But when I was writing it, the flow of the story went the way it did, so I followed it. ^_^ And then it was like I'm done now and I was like O:.

I'm glad you said that about the second one too, because it's such a cliff hanger that I was sure everyone would be "You must write more!!" Like it's the ending of a chapter instead of an ending of a story. I like that too, but then again, I can do whatever I want with it in my head with it, so that's why I like open ended stories. Might still write something after it, but we'll see. :)

Thanks for reading and commenting like always!

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momo_love96 May 16 2011, 13:24:29 UTC
aw aw aw XD the 1st one ~ it's weird to read that Ohno would steal things cause in real life he seems the last person I'd think about to do such a thing XD but of course it was itneresting and awesome XD haha Jun soo romantic <3.

no wait :|:| Ohno didn't die,right???? tell me he didn't T_T even if you tell me he did >.> I'd still think he's alive XD well awesome <3 I like Arashi as a mafia gang haha XD

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boblemon May 16 2011, 14:38:42 UTC
I don't know... I can picture Ohno selectively stealing things, especially if it was to tease someone like Jun. XD

Please think of him as alive if you feel so inclined. ^__^ I prefer happy endings myself.

Thanks for reading and commenting! I hope you liked them. :)

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