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Feb 24, 2014 21:22

Like A Mirage
Title: Like A Mirage
Series/sequel: -
Author: Sagaluthien
Fandom, characters: POTC/Twilight, Captain Jack Sparrow, Esme Cullen
Rating, warnings: PG-13, Crossover, Au
Word count: 706
Beta: haldoor
A/N: Written for 1_million_words weekend challenge/2014, and the crossover month, also for the A to Z challenge, Letter F, and 52_challenge # 53 Writer's Choice, table here

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challenge:a to z, challenge:52 challenge, rating:pg-13, type:crossover, type:au, community:1 million words, character:esme cullen, fandom:twilight, fandom:potc, character:jack sparrow

Comments 2

haldoor February 26 2014, 09:03:57 UTC

I really liked this even though I don't know Twilight so well. Jack seemed very in character! Well done!

'and in one pocket fund a coin' the word should be 'found' not fund.

sagas_stories February 26 2014, 16:05:27 UTC

thank you for reading and your beta. I corrected the word you pointed out.

I do think I got jack more in character than Esme. This was what come to mind.