Fic: The Hunter Gets Captured By The Prey (The Self-Talk Mix)

[saeva]

The Hunter Gets Captured By The Game (The Self-Talk Mix)
"You can't even take a little rough play without making everything a mess, can you?"
Author's Notes: Normally, I'm not the sort of person who puts a lot of warnings especially for something written for a kink request, but in this case I'll make an exception: The following is not a nice

Comments

[3jane]

Interesting.

[saeva]

Um. Thanks? *laughs*

- Andrea.

[neery]

Interesting fic! I liked the reveal at the end, that the beginning was just one of Rodney's fanatsies, because itherwise it would have felt rather out of character for John. But as role-play, it's great.

[saeva]

Why do I get the feeling I'm going to get a lot of 'interesting'? *grin* Glad you liked it!

- Andrea.

[neery]

*looks at other comment* Um, oops, didn't even see that. But two is coincidence. Three will be a trend!

[overchay]

The imagery of this. Oh, lordy. This was outstanding. Had to read it twice, and in my book, anything I have to read more than once so I can appreciate every little detail and is actually worth doing so is something amazingt. I love the second to last paragraph. Just the image of that in my head had me rereading that one part several times. Wow. This was so different and so much better than anything I ever could have expected to recieve for my request.

I don't know how to explain what it is, exactly, that I love so much about this. It's just fabulous and worth reading many, many times over.

And, wow. Reading anything Chuck Palahniuk's written before I've started any kind of writing project always fucks with my style so I definitely see where your blame is coming from.

The 'quirk'iness you've infused into this is gorgeous. I love the way it's so different, without being confusing or distracting. Thank you; thank you so much for writing this and making this such an intruiging read. Wow. I really love this.

[saeva]

I'm really glad you enjoyed it. It's always a fear when you write something like this, especially when you go outside the bounds of the prompt some and do something unusual, that it really isn't going to come off well at all, so it's great to know that it worked for you (and that you didn't really mean "excluding fecal play *and* aphyxiation" *laughs*).

And I haven't read anything Chuck Palahniuk since I picked up Lullaby a month and a half ago on sale; it's just the sad state of affairs that I can't write anything short without some stylistic quirk from him. Bbut, hey, at least this isn't second person present tense like other fics I could mention; that's a step up, right? *grins*

Anyway, I'm really, really glad you liked it so much and that it worked for you! I hope you enjoy the re-reads just as much.

- Andrea.

[hexnessie]

'Interesting' is very right ::g:: Definitely one of the most interesting fics I've read lately. Jumbled as it should be, given the topic; hot at times; scary all over. Leaves the reader tumbled out of balance. You did a great job as a writer.

[adafrog]

Wow. Okay. Took me a bit. The jumble goes well, I think, since we're in Rodney's brain. The end was great. Rodney and the fantasy-wasn't prepared for that, but I could see it.
Love the pincushions. lol