Comments | saddle_tramp: FIC: Right Here (By Your Side)

saddle_tramp

FIC: Right Here (By Your Side) - Hawaii Five-0, Danny/Steve PG-13

Nov 06, 2010 17:38

So uhm... yeah.

I committed fic.

In a new fandom that I've been trying to convince myself not to write in for weeks, so of course I lost the battle when I'm 43k plus words into a story in a completely different fandom. *bemused* This is looking like it will be the first part of a trilogy if my girl gets her way, and she usually does. I want to ( Read more... )

fic, hawaii five-0

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huntress69 November 7 2010, 02:12:36 UTC

I'm trying to figure out the best part in this entire fic and I am coming up empty (a rare thing for me) because I have been (literally) giggling from the moment Steve entered the office. Translation: I loved every minute of it! To Mems it goes!!

saddle_tramp November 7 2010, 03:27:09 UTC

You just made my day. :-D I always love good feedback, especially feedback saying I made someone laugh, but good feedback from an author whose fic I love is the very best kind. I haven't posted any fic at all in a long time (long enough I forgot how to kick LJ's formatting into shape when I'm copy/pasting from Word, lol) and you made my night. Thank you!!

huntress69 November 7 2010, 17:57:45 UTC

Do you use the html tab to post? I find it easier.

saddle_tramp November 7 2010, 18:18:06 UTC

I tried both ways, and managed to just confuse myself. lol Then I finally remembered that I used to copy/paste into Front Page and clean the HTML first, then go to LJ to post, but by then I had edited so many times I said screw it. :-D Next time I'll do it right.

dodger_sister November 9 2010, 05:48:16 UTC

Dude. I have been struggling for weeks to stay out of this fandom - and I totally failed at it. So it's nice to see you failed at staying out of H5-O too. I Love This Fic!!! The way they talk to each other is so comfortable and so Danny&Steve. The way they do it right in front of Rachel, completely at ease, is great. That Steve is spending so much time with Grace (I loved the few interactions they have had on the show) and that Chin and Kono are totally listening in and biting their knuckles and betting on them. That Rachel approves of Steve.

Everything.

But honestly, it's the language, you nailed the way these two speak, the thing with the coffee, the way they feed off each other.

Hawaii Five-O fic #2 in the favorites folder!

saddle_tramp November 9 2010, 17:09:53 UTC

This, just.... Yeah. Thank you so much! It always makes my day to get feedback at all, but getting feedback like this is even better! I'm honored that you put my fic in your faves. That's really high praise to me. :-D

I'm so glad that this fic worked. I really wasn't sure I had them down enough to take the plunge, but then I couldn't not write this one, and my girl said post it (She read it for me, even though she doesn't watch the show 'cause she's that awesome. lol) so I did. Having an author whose fic I kind of love (I suck at leaving feedback because I'm kind of embarrassingly bad about fangirly flailing if I do comment, but your Dean-writes-Glee fic is MADE of awesome!) leave good feedback is very much with the happy making!

The Danny and Steve talking in front of Rachel thing is just something I can't see them not doing. They don't seem to care where they are or who's watching when the start off on a tangent at each other on the show, and yeah. The Danny and Steve in my head would probably argue like an old married couple ( ... )

dodger_sister November 10 2010, 00:43:20 UTC

heehee Your Puck icon makes me happy.

After I read this fic, I realized it was H5-O night and spent all night being like, "Is it daytime yet, so I can watch some Danny&Steve please?" Really, I'm too nice, not turning on the TV after my sister goes to sleep when I really, really was hit with a Hawaii Five-O craving hard.

Having an author whose fic I kind of love (I suck at leaving feedback because I'm kind of embarrassingly bad about fangirly flailing if I do comment, but your Dean-writes-Glee fic is MADE of awesome!) leave good feedback is very much with the happy making!

Dude! Thanks! I generally am lazy and don't comment but my rule of thumb is, if it is good enough to save to my favorites, the author deserves a comment. The Dean-writes-Glee-fic is something I am really proud of, so I'm glad to keep getting love for it!

The Danny and Steve talking in front of Rachel thing is just something I can't see them not doing. They don't seem to care where they are or who's watching when the start off on a tangent at each other on the ( ... )

saddle_tramp November 10 2010, 06:46:20 UTC

I put off answering this because I wanted to watch H5-0 for this week first, but then I saw Glee and yeah. Not happening tonight. I'm saving H5-0 for tomorrow. ;-D So I can't really comment on this week's H5-0 except to say I saw caps of them in uniform and dude. Serious eyecandy.

heehee Your Puck icon makes me happy.

*beams* Thanks! I love Killroy!Puck. That bit in the episode made me pitifully happy.

After I read this fic, I realized it was H5-O night and spent all night being like, "Is it daytime yet, so I can watch some Danny&Steve please?" Really, I'm too nice

I so sympathize! All day today I kept wanting to watch it, but I was busy and didn't have time until it was Glee time, and then after that I was all OMG about Glee and yeah. H5-0 is getting it's own night tomorrow so I can rewatch as usual. ;-D And yes, you are too nice! Sister-type person should be grateful! lol

Dude! Thanks! ~~ The Dean-writes-Glee-fic is something I am really proud of, so I'm glad to keep getting love for it!Of course you're still getting love ( ... )

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