FIC: Right Here (By Your Side) - Hawaii Five-0, Danny/Steve PG-13

Nov 06, 2010 17:38

So uhm...  yeah.

I committed fic.

In a new fandom that I've been trying to convince myself not to write in for weeks, so of course I lost the battle when I'm 43k plus words into a story in a completely different fandom. *bemused* This is looking like it will be the first part of a trilogy if my girl gets her way, and she usually does. I want to ( Read more... )

fic, hawaii five-0

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saddle_tramp November 9 2010, 17:09:53 UTC
This, just.... Yeah. Thank you so much! It always makes my day to get feedback at all, but getting feedback like this is even better! I'm honored that you put my fic in your faves. That's really high praise to me. :-D

I'm so glad that this fic worked. I really wasn't sure I had them down enough to take the plunge, but then I couldn't not write this one, and my girl said post it (She read it for me, even though she doesn't watch the show 'cause she's that awesome. lol) so I did. Having an author whose fic I kind of love (I suck at leaving feedback because I'm kind of embarrassingly bad about fangirly flailing if I do comment, but your Dean-writes-Glee fic is MADE of awesome!) leave good feedback is very much with the happy making!

The Danny and Steve talking in front of Rachel thing is just something I can't see them not doing. They don't seem to care where they are or who's watching when the start off on a tangent at each other on the show, and yeah. The Danny and Steve in my head would probably argue like an old married couple at a funeral, though quietly of course, and Steve would try hard not to smile too much because of respect for the dead, but yeah. He can't help it, he loves making Danny crazy. ;-D

Grace would insist on her and Danny spending time with Steve, I think, because Steve's awesome. *snickers* She's like, mini Danny to me, so all the things Danny's drawn to would be things Gracie liked too. The Grace in my head would get a kick out of giggling at Danny and Steve bickering and teasing each other, and she'd be a little instigator just because it's fun to watch her Danno lose it spectacularly. She thinks the flailing is funny, which is part of why she wanted to surf so bad. ;->

And Kono and Chin? Dude. They have to have some kind of hobby, what with working for a crazy man and his control freak partner. Laughing at their bosses and placing bets on their sex life is more fun than doing paperwork, any day.

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dodger_sister November 10 2010, 00:43:20 UTC
heehee Your Puck icon makes me happy.

After I read this fic, I realized it was H5-O night and spent all night being like, "Is it daytime yet, so I can watch some Danny&Steve please?" Really, I'm too nice, not turning on the TV after my sister goes to sleep when I really, really was hit with a Hawaii Five-O craving hard.

Having an author whose fic I kind of love (I suck at leaving feedback because I'm kind of embarrassingly bad about fangirly flailing if I do comment, but your Dean-writes-Glee fic is MADE of awesome!) leave good feedback is very much with the happy making!

Dude! Thanks! I generally am lazy and don't comment but my rule of thumb is, if it is good enough to save to my favorites, the author deserves a comment. The Dean-writes-Glee-fic is something I am really proud of, so I'm glad to keep getting love for it!

The Danny and Steve talking in front of Rachel thing is just something I can't see them not doing. They don't seem to care where they are or who's watching when the start off on a tangent at each other on the show...
...and Steve would try hard not to smile too much because of respect for the dead, but yeah. He can't help it, he loves making Danny crazy. ;-D

It's true, they had their little love-bickering in the middle of a hostage situation once, they really don't care who sees them do it. And that SMILE! Yes, that little "Awwww-I-love-you-too" smile that Steve gives Danny. Eep. A H5-O fic just sparked in my head. Dammit. Well, now I've officially fallen into this fandom and I guess I have to go write now. :)

I just saw this week's episode and my heart went all thumpy-thump over Danny and Grace at the beginning. And did you see Chin giving Danny "dating" advice on how to handle Steve? In the scene at the bar. I was like squee over that.

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saddle_tramp November 10 2010, 06:46:20 UTC
I put off answering this because I wanted to watch H5-0 for this week first, but then I saw Glee and yeah. Not happening tonight. I'm saving H5-0 for tomorrow. ;-D So I can't really comment on this week's H5-0 except to say I saw caps of them in uniform and dude. Serious eyecandy.

heehee Your Puck icon makes me happy.

*beams* Thanks! I love Killroy!Puck. That bit in the episode made me pitifully happy.

After I read this fic, I realized it was H5-O night and spent all night being like, "Is it daytime yet, so I can watch some Danny&Steve please?" Really, I'm too nice

I so sympathize! All day today I kept wanting to watch it, but I was busy and didn't have time until it was Glee time, and then after that I was all OMG about Glee and yeah. H5-0 is getting it's own night tomorrow so I can rewatch as usual. ;-D And yes, you are too nice! Sister-type person should be grateful! lol

Dude! Thanks! ~~ The Dean-writes-Glee-fic is something I am really proud of, so I'm glad to keep getting love for it!

Of course you're still getting love for it, it's awesome!

I generally am lazy and don't comment but my rule of thumb is, if it is good enough to save to my favorites, the author deserves a comment.

I'm so pitiful. I save lots of fics that I didn't comment on. I'm such a bad fangirl I hardly ever comment even to my favorite authors because when I do I have this habit of embarrassing myself. ... And sometimes scaring people. lol I'm not crazy, I swear! Or at least, not the dangerous kind of crazy... *giggles*

It's true, they had their little love-bickering in the middle of a hostage situation once, they really don't care who sees them do it.

Exactly! They do it right out in front of God and everybody, which I love. I think it's what made me fall so hard for them. *grins*

And that SMILE! Yes, that little "Awwww-I-love-you-too" smile that Steve gives Danny.

*nodsnodsnods* That smile could turn Danny gay, I swear, even if he wasn't so obviously neck-deep in love with Steve. Danny's got one a lot like it that he gives Steve sometimes too, with similar results, I'm sure.

Eep. A H5-O fic just sparked in my head. Dammit. Well, now I've officially fallen into this fandom and I guess I have to go write now. :)

*cheers and dances*

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dodger_sister November 11 2010, 07:55:20 UTC
So I can't really comment on this week's H5-0 except to say I saw caps of them in uniform and dude. Serious eyecandy.

I know, Steve in the full dress uniform killed me dead.

I hardly ever comment even to my favorite authors because when I do I have this habit of embarrassing myself. ... And sometimes scaring people. lol I'm not crazy, I swear! Or at least, not the dangerous kind of crazy... *giggles*

An author I love to death commented on my Dean-Glee fic and I was like a spazz all over her because I love her stuff and had just read a big epic piece of her's the week before and I was all twitchy all over her very nice comment to me. lol It was embarrassing.

*nodsnodsnods* That smile could turn Danny gay, I swear, even if he wasn't so obviously neck-deep in love with Steve. Danny's got one a lot like it that he gives Steve sometimes too, with similar results, I'm sure.

I think that smile DID turn Danny gay. I mean, he has a kid, he must like women a little bit. But then Steve is all smiles and sweetness and...yeah.

Yeah, Danny's smile is like a little, "I will give you this smile because I can't brush my fingers through your hair right now." It's like he wants to touch him but he can't, so he says it in a smile. Er, or something. Not that I notice every time Danny smiles at me, er, Steve.

The fic that sparked in my head may be entirely built around them smiling at each other, so...okay then. I have a thing for their stupid smiles. /blushes/

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saddle_tramp November 15 2010, 01:11:59 UTC
*facepalms* I thought I replied to this, but evidently not! lol Sorry!!

Steve in the full dress uniform killed me dead.

Dude, seriously. There was squeaking and maybe some 'awww' because Danny's so in love with him and when Steve said 'I know you' he meant 'I love you', and yes. I loved that bit!

An author I love to death commented on my Dean-Glee fic and I was like a spazz all over her ~~~ It was embarrassing.

Oh god, I sympathize. Also, I resemble that remark. :-D

I think that smile DID turn Danny gay. I mean, he has a kid, he must like women a little bit. But then Steve is all smiles and sweetness and...yeah.

Oh yeah! It was all sparks and testosterone until Danny gt that sweet little smile the first time, and then it was all over but the bickering. *grins*

Yeah, Danny's smile is like a little, "I will give you this smile because I can't brush my fingers through your hair right now." It's like he wants to touch him but he can't, so he says it in a smile. Er, or something. Not that I notice every time Danny smiles at me, er, Steve.

So much with the yes! The way they look at each other totally gives it all away. I firmly believe they are head over heels, just possibly in denial. Maybe. Or they could be fucking like bunnies whenever they're alone. It could go either way, I think. lol

The fic that sparked in my head may be entirely built around them smiling at each other, so...okay then. I have a thing for their stupid smiles. /blushes/

EEEEE!!!! I love the smiles too! Like, so freaking much it's sad and my mom refuses to watch the show with me anymore because I fangirl over them smiling at each other too much. *giggles* Write that fic! Writewritewrite!

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