[fic] Broken 31/??

Apr 16, 2008 11:44


Title: Broken
Chapters: 31/?
Author: sabersenshi
Pairing: Reita/Ruki, Uruha/Aoi, Miyavi/Kai
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: angst, bad language, sex…eventually
Summary: Reita’s a popular rich kid.  Ruki hates rich kids.

Disclaimer: *sniffles* They're Not Mine.
Notes: AU, High School fic.

previously: 1/ 2/ 3/ 4/ 5/ 6/ 7/ 8/ 9/ 10/ 10 1/2--/ 11/ 12/ 13/ 14/ 1516Read more... )

high school, au, gazette, fanfic, broken

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soumei April 16 2008, 19:17:22 UTC
YAY! Update! XDD

i cant wait for more! yesh! ruki needs to move in with reita!!

and ruki's dad is >:|

and awwww reita is so sweet ♥

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andidp April 16 2008, 20:37:38 UTC
...ugh... i have a bad feeling that's yune watching ... and if so, he's gonna get the dirt on their "secret" performances on saturday's and rat them out isn't he??? .... grrrrrrrr ... *kicks yune*

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sabersenshi April 18 2008, 19:02:50 UTC
Maybe it's Yune...maybe it's not. But go ahead and kick him anyway..it's fun.

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sabersenshi April 18 2008, 19:01:51 UTC
I have this thing about making everybody's dad a jerk. First it was Reita's...but he's come to his senses. So now it's Ruki's dad's turn. But I think I'm gonna just leave him as an ass. That way the 2 can just live together...complete with all the fun that implies. *wonders how many different Reituki sex scenes I can manage for this fic*

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sillygoddess April 16 2008, 20:51:19 UTC
D: good company or bad company? O_O

though the last part it showed you were in a hurry...in another chapter that ruki moving out with rei issue would have been a few lines longer xD

it came out fine I think, I liked it and its substantial =) with fluff xD ^^

*I´m so sleepy suddenly y.y*

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sabersenshi April 18 2008, 19:06:51 UTC
It was 'meh' company. I don't really have an opinion either way about her. Sometimes she's fine, sometimes she's an ass. This time was allright...but she stayed for almost 10 hours!!!

Well...actually...I planned on that Ruki moving in with Reita bit being in the next chapter. At the last minute I decided to add that as kind of a 'preview'. I'm still writing a bigger Rei/Ru discussion for the next chapter....so it's gonna be a lot more than a few lines longer.

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satuchomiss April 16 2008, 21:45:42 UTC
omg yay new chap. thx for posting.

omg i say it's Yune falowing and that he's gonna tell Ruki's dad every thing. omg!

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sabersenshi April 18 2008, 19:07:41 UTC
Thanks for reading and commenting

We'll just havet o wait and see if it's Yune or not....

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aniffa April 16 2008, 21:47:21 UTC
I loved the fluff!
Rei comforting Ruki was so sweet <33

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sabersenshi April 18 2008, 19:09:26 UTC
I never knew that fluff would be so much FUN to write. ^^
I always thought I'd be better at sarcasm..since I tend to be very sarcastic myself.

Thanks~~~

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angie_valo April 17 2008, 00:09:55 UTC
pretty good
i don't like ruki's dad he is evil <.<
and who was looking at them Oo

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sabersenshi April 18 2008, 19:10:20 UTC
So now I've got everybody hating Ruki's dad. XD

I'mnot telling..yet..

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