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The Honey Trap

May 31, 2005 16:10

The Honey Trap
Author: SabaceanBabe
Word Count: 4,962
Date: May 31, 2005
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Helo/Sharon
Spoilers: Flesh and Bone
Disclaimers: Not mine.
Author's Note: This fic came about because some of the members of hidden_elysium were lamenting the lack of shower scenes for Helo and Boomer. Beta-free. If anyone wants to volunteer to improve this ( Read more... )

my bsg fic, my bsg fic: s1, my fic

Comments 40

dangermousie May 31 2005, 21:58:37 UTC

That was unbelievably good. Added it to my memories. Please continue!

dangermousie May 31 2005, 21:59:01 UTC

P.S. Is it OK if I nomm it in the H/B category?

sabaceanbabe June 1 2005, 12:57:23 UTC

Hee. *hug* Absolutely, although I hope you didn't wait until I could reply! *looks at calendar*

dangermousie June 1 2005, 13:22:55 UTC

Nope, I didn't. You have been nommed :)

Thread 6

ancarett May 31 2005, 22:14:15 UTC

Wow, hot and painful and very, very good!

sabaceanbabe June 1 2005, 12:58:02 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it (it was definitely fun to write...)!

ship_recs May 31 2005, 23:23:54 UTC

Nice.

sabaceanbabe June 1 2005, 12:58:19 UTC

Thanks!

lee_in_limbo June 1 2005, 00:40:29 UTC

Strong. Perhaps righer in detail in places than it really needs, but strong. The shower scene was really quite saucy, especially for you. Definitely temperature-raising.

I still haven't seen any of the series. Does Sharon really call him Helo that often? I shouldn't doubt you here. You know the show, and I know you. Just asking out of curiousity.

Very nice work, darling. Sad and a little anti-climactic towards the end, but then, I've read the machine pieces, so I know there's more.

L o L,
glad to see you writing again

sabaceanbabe June 1 2005, 13:00:43 UTC

*grins and hugs you*

And yes, she really does call him Helo that often. In fact, she *never* calls him anything else and it's pretty much becoming canon that he's Helo even though his given name is Karl. :)

Funny you mention the ending... I was originally just going to go with "go to hell" but then I thought about those who wanted the fic in the first place and figured they (eyes un4scene) might lynch me. Hee.

lee_in_limbo June 1 2005, 16:37:43 UTC

*hugs back warmly*

Well, I figured you'd know Sharon better than me.

I can see what you mean by your endings. You might have needed to write something to finsh that piece regardless. A one line probably would have done it, but you did nice work resolving the scene. It just feels like there's something more, or less. I dunno. I'm not thinking about it properly this afternoon. Been really busy today.

Gonna be online if you wanna gab, but I'll understand if you stay away.

L o L,
heading off

sabaceanbabe June 1 2005, 16:54:23 UTC

Actually, I just got a new PC at work last week, and I don't have AIM installed yet. I'll have to get on that. :)

Thread 5

dingoaction June 1 2005, 02:04:03 UTC

damn! you got them in the shower and into civilian clothes! And not just any shower, a hot shower! I like how through the whole thing, Sharon can't stand the attitude Six takes toward humans and sex, and then at the end, takes the same "I'll make you believe" attitude as Baltar's Six.

I also enjoyed the appreciation of Helo's ass...but then, who doesn't, really?

sabaceanbabe June 1 2005, 13:02:15 UTC

Ooo... Nice Charlie icon! :)

Glad you enjoyed it, dingo. And, all things considered, there simply had to be civilian clothes and ass-appreciation in this, don't you think? :P