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The Honey Trap

May 31, 2005 16:10

The Honey Trap
Author: SabaceanBabe
Word Count: 4,962
Date: May 31, 2005
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Helo/Sharon
Spoilers: Flesh and Bone
Disclaimers: Not mine.
Author's Note: This fic came about because some of the members of hidden_elysium were lamenting the lack of shower scenes for Helo and Boomer. Beta-free. If anyone wants to volunteer to improve this ( Read more... )

my bsg fic, my bsg fic: s1, my fic

Comments 40

un4scene June 1 2005, 03:08:37 UTC

That was *awesome* fun! Just the thing for under the pillow after a long day at work. :D

Was that "Man" there on purpose, I wonder.

sabaceanbabe June 1 2005, 13:03:06 UTC

Hee. You *know* it had to be done. Kind of like an easter egg in a DVD, man.

un4scene June 1 2005, 14:41:59 UTC

You rock, man!

And have to say, I like the consistency of his reaction to finding out about Sharon. We all wish for fluffy bunnies and happy endings, but that's not Helo damn it! Well, not yet. *hopes*

maybedarkpink June 1 2005, 06:11:10 UTC

Wow, this is gorgeous. Wow.

sabaceanbabe June 1 2005, 13:03:41 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

shadowserenity June 1 2005, 09:13:49 UTC

Damn sbabe, that was pure brilliance. I love it to *death*. You can't believe how excited I was to see this story today. You've honestly made an otherwise awful day very good.

Wow. I love it. Everything about it. I wish Helo had stopped and listened to what Sharon had to say, but he was in overdrive. He only heard what he wanted to hear and he needed to get the hell out of there.

lee_in_limbo - She really does call him Helo that much. Never refers to him as Karl or hey, you! :)

Sbabe, thank you so much for writing this story. I'll definitely remember the first H/B shower smut!

sabaceanbabe June 1 2005, 13:05:10 UTC

Aw, you're making me blush...

I didn't have a particularly good day myself, Ams, so this seems to have cheered both of us up a bit. :)

carrole June 2 2005, 00:49:58 UTC

*remembers why she waited until AFTER she got home from work to read this story*

That would be because there are no cold showers at work...gee whiz.

shadowserenity June 2 2005, 01:02:34 UTC

Isn't it so *awesome*, Carrsie?

Sbabe, you've so outdone yourself. I wish I hadn't read the story yesterday so I'd be able to read it again today for the first time.

carrole June 2 2005, 01:13:03 UTC

Yes, it is so awesome. *waves to sbabe*

sabaceanbabe June 2 2005, 13:07:26 UTC

*waves back* Hey, carr! :)

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reneedy June 2 2005, 19:18:01 UTC

ahem. ooh, I liked it! Good job.

I guess I can't claim I don't read fan fic anymore. Though I still have a neurotic approach of skimming ahead then going back and reading a bit more closely. Not sure what I'm afraid of.

A couple things:
- Has Doral ever been called Three on the show? (Have I gone mad?)
- What does "snicked" mean?

sabaceanbabe June 2 2005, 19:36:39 UTC

Yay! You liked it! :D

Nah. He's never been called anything but Doral on the show (Spacey, for Kevin Spacey in my head) - Doral was awkward to me in this situation, so I assigned him a number, kinda like Amsie assigned Sharon the number Eight in Whispers of the System.

"Snicked" is a term that I may have made up. It's just kind of a word describing a sound as a door "snicks" shut -- the latch clicking as it slides into place, that sort of thing.