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stalinglim May 27 2011, 23:50:59 UTC
Oh... OH I LOVED ALL OF THESE.

The second and the last one especially. The last one is fantastic because it's so domestic and loving and yet, cranky and Lois!

And alfred... he is so tired, but he loves them all so, so much. I would kill for the fiction where it is alfred who goes out and brings his lost lamb home.

...or Alfred in the cemetery.

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saavikam77 May 28 2011, 01:31:14 UTC
Thank you so much, hon! :D

I just couldn't help myself with Lois's anti-housewife stance, and it's SO my personal canon that Alfred is the one that brings Jason home. ^___^

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stalinglim May 28 2011, 01:33:34 UTC
MINE TOO. So totally. He's the only one with a gentle enough hand throughout Jason's life, and he wouldn't judge Jason's having bloody hands.

I do not believe Alfred's hands are completely clean. Bruce's law is _not_ Alfred's law.

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saavikam77 May 28 2011, 01:37:18 UTC
Exactly. On all points. I think Jason would understand that Alfred is the only one that really gets him and wouldn't judge him. And no way does Bruce have any idea of half the stuff Alfred's done in his time. ^_~

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me_ya_ri May 28 2011, 01:18:29 UTC
♥+infinity I really love the last one. That's married life + Lois to a T! XD

Great job on all of these!

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saavikam77 May 28 2011, 01:31:55 UTC
Thanks so much, sweetie! :) I just couldn't help myself with that one. ^_~

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januaried May 28 2011, 04:40:55 UTC
LULZ at the last one. You tell him, Lois! XD

Love the Kala/Jay one too. That relationship will definitely be fun to read. :D

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saavikam77 May 28 2011, 14:27:37 UTC
Hee! Thanks, hon! ^___^ I just couldn't resist the whole laundry thing. :p

And I'm very much looking forward to collaborating with Loissa on the Kala/Jay relationship. >:D

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barb1808 May 28 2011, 19:30:06 UTC
Saavi you keep amazing me with what you write. All these drabbles show in their variety what a good writer you are. Each drabble brings out another set of emotions in me.

With the last one you made me chuckle. The previous made me marvel with Lois. 'Forever Cherished' made my heart ache, and so on.

Very well done. *lifts hat*

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saavikam77 May 28 2011, 20:26:50 UTC
Thank you so much, hon! *blushes* ^___^

I'm really glad these all brought so much emotion up. :)

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repmetsyrrah May 29 2011, 11:19:23 UTC
Well you know I love my one :P but the last one made me laugh too, so Lois :P I love how much you can fit into so few words. Truly awesome.

(I'm sure the others are good too but I don't know any of the 'verses well enough, sorry :P)

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saavikam77 May 29 2011, 16:00:39 UTC
Aw, thank you so much, hon! :D *blushes*

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