Comments | saavikam77: Ficlet: Right Under Her Nose | DCU | Lois, Clark/Bruce | PG-13

saavikam77

Ficlet: Right Under Her Nose | DCU | Lois, Clark/Bruce | PG-13 | 1/1

Dec 31, 2010 17:52

Title: Right Under Her Nose
Fandom: DCU (general comics, canon-light)
Characters/Pairing: Lois, Clark/Bruce
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 929
Prompt: For the 2010 World's Finest Gift Exchange: F13: At the Daily Planet Christmas party, Lois makes some surprising observations. Either pre-slash, in the longing phase or established relationship but not ( Read more... )

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Comments 37

eternal_moonie January 1 2011, 00:41:39 UTC

Absolutely LOVE it!!!

saavikam77 January 1 2011, 00:49:49 UTC

Hee! Thanks so much, hon! :D

bradygirl_12 January 1 2011, 01:39:06 UTC

Oh, yes, this is my Lois. *nods vigorously* Protective of Clark, but ready to read him the riot act for keeping secrets from her! :) If you do write a sequel, it'll be interesting to see just how far Clark spills his secrets! :)

He was such a dead man.

Pure Lois! :)

I liked the mention of Steve Lombard (he could always play the jerk so well), and Jimmy wanting to take pictures of the snowy park. He really is a sweet kid. No wonder Lois thought of tagging along.

I just love her tough-as-nails, pushy, snoopy, and good-hearted beneath the snark. She really is one of the great characters in comics. :)

saavikam77 January 1 2011, 02:25:10 UTC

HEE!! Thank you so much, hon! :D

My Lois muse was so insistent on this one. No way is Clark getting away with keeping such juicy secrets from her. ^_~ And at this point, I don't think there's much he's gonna be able to keep under wraps.

So glad you liked the ensemble I put together for this one. Lombard is so good for the token douche-bag, and I can never resist writing Jimmy as sweet. He just is! :)

ladyblkrose January 1 2011, 02:14:17 UTC

"the two of them a story that she might not even be able to report sitting right under her nose, undetected for years.

He was such a dead man."

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA Oh Lois, I loved this, no jealousy, no, anger at finding a wonderfully juicy story and not being able to run with it. I'd like to think it was because of her close friendship with Clark...but outing the owner of your place of employment is a real career no-no XD.

I really liked your no-nonsense, hard as nails, reporter-to-da-heart Lois faced with a Clark who is now an egnima and so busted!!!
Thank you for sharing your Lois with us and Baby, Have a wonderful Happy New Year

saavikam77 January 1 2011, 02:30:10 UTC

Haha! Thank you so much, hon!

I'm definitely seeing it as their close friendship, and Lois not so much liking the idea of him keeping secrets from her. She knows there are always exceptions to the 'everything's a story' rule, too. ^_~

Happy New Year to you, too, sweetie! *snugs*

catalenamara January 1 2011, 02:15:02 UTC

Delightful story - love your Lois!

saavikam77 January 1 2011, 02:30:28 UTC

Thank you so much! :D

Congratulations on participating in the challenge ctbn60 January 1 2011, 02:19:17 UTC

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Re: Congratulations on participating in the challenge saavikam77 January 1 2011, 02:31:25 UTC

HEEE!! Thank you so much for this, hon! :D

*dances and twirls* ^____^ I'm such a sucker for participation banners. :p

Re: Congratulations on participating in the challenge ctbn60 January 1 2011, 02:52:13 UTC

You are so welcome. I love it when I get this kind of reaction! Enjoy and have a great new year!!!

Re: Congratulations on participating in the challenge saavikam77 January 1 2011, 02:56:58 UTC

Happy New Year to you, to! :)