Fic: Lights Through a Shining Prism | DCU | Clark/Bruce | PG | 1/1

[saavikam77]

Title: Lights Through a Shining Prism
Fandom: DCU
Pairing: Clark Kent/Bruce Wayne
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2,442
Prompts: For the World's Finest Gift Exchange: F27 - just an expression out of which you can make anything you want (and on every imagery level you want) - "black and blue"; For dcu_freeforall/ The 2008 DCU Free For All Winter Holiday Challenge: T05; P08

Comments

[darthbatgirl]

This was great! Loved all the ways you were able to use black and blue, and the snapshots that Clark saw. The Christmas one was adorable.

And yay the boys got a happy ending, I was afraid that it might not be.

Wonderful!

[saavikam77]

Thank you! :D I had fun running with the prompt, and I was just itching to do the Christmas scene. ^_~ And I couldn't very well leave them without a happy ending here. It would have just been too cruel. *huggles Clark and Bruce* They deserve every happy ending they can get. :)

[bradygirl_12]

Wonderful snapshots, Saavi! A good look into Clark's psyche, his desires and fears. He's a family kind of guy, so it's natural he'd include the boys and Kara. :)

It would have been very poignant if upon awakening nothing came of Clark's hallucinations, but of course this is nicer! :)

And he didn't even feel up to ranting and raving about Bruce secretly keeping silver K! Good job! ;)

[saavikam77]

Thank you so much, hon! :D I couldn't resist including all the things Clark might desire, as far as family goes. ^_^ And I just couldn't bear to leave them without a happy ending - they deserve every one they can get. :) I think Clark secretly knows that, and is thankful for the gift the magic K gave him. ^_~

[hitokaji]

Aww this is so sweet! I was kind confused in the begining but it's all clear now. :D
Well-done! I love it! ;)

[saavikam77]

Thank you so much! :D It was meant to be confusing at first, of course, then become clear when Clark woke up. I'm glad that effect worked. :)

[jij]

Oh wow! I really like how you mixed and mingled the colors in each vignette, how the black and blue were different things each time and combined with other colors to give different connotations. Very, very cool.

[saavikam77]

Thank you so much!! ^_^ I really enjoyed exploring how many ways I could use the prompt.

[dm_wyatt]

Aw....

That was sweet.

Nice job.

[saavikam77]

Thanks so much! :D Glad you liked this!