Comments | rz_jocelyn: RP Fanfic: Fear

rz_jocelyn

RP Fanfic: Fear

Jan 19, 2010 10:53

Title: Fear

Rating: G

Warning: N/A

Status: Complete

Characters: SMAP

Pairings/Friendship: Kusanagi Tsuyoshi + SMAP Friendship

Timeline: Right after the incident and just before Tsuyoshi's punishment.

Summary: After being arrested, Kusanagi Tsuyoshi had to face the consequences no matter how much he feared them.

A/N: None of the characters/actors ( Read more... )

artist: kimura takuya, fandom: real person, fic type: one-shot, misc: fanfiction, artist: inagaki goro, group: smap, artist: nakai masahiro, artist: kusanagi tsuyoshi, artist: katori shingo

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tsuristyle January 23 2010, 02:37:55 UTC

♥♥♥ I love this. I've always found the Kimura-Tsuyoshi relationship interesting, with Tsuyoshi's admiration of Kimura and their clashing personalities and how they've gradually come to accept each other. (I think I secretly kind of ship them >_>) And I love how you portrayed Tsuyoshi's relationships with the other members-- Shingo taking on some of the emotional burden, Goro simply being calm and patient. It seems like Goro and Tsuyoshi have often been that sort of 'calm refuge' for each other in the midst of the others' more volatile personalities :)

Sorry, I'm rambling :P I'm so happy to see more smapfic! If you plan to write more, I look forward to reading it :D

rz_jocelyn January 23 2010, 07:41:28 UTC

Arigatou! XD I'm ecstatic that you love this.

My inner Takuya/Tsuyoshi fangirl just ran wild with this fic. Lol... I've always felt that of all the Members, they are the ones who are in the extreme, complete opposite spectrum of each other, yet over the years, they just accepted each other, differences and all. <3 And, I'm glad that you enjoyed Tsuyoshi's relationship with the others.

Please, write as long as you like. When it comes to SMAP, I can go on and on for hours. Haha... And, I'm in the same boat with you about smapfic. I adore the stories that you have written, and I look forward to more of your works (if you're planning to write XD). By the way, do you mind if a add you as a friend?

tsuristyle January 23 2010, 09:50:17 UTC

I just thought of this, but it seems like, of all the members, theirs was very much a sempai-kouhai relationship for a long time-- Kimura being strict and criticizing, but ready to leap to the defense if anyone should threaten his kouhai; Tsuyoshi looking up to him and trying to outgrow his role and win approval in his bandmate's eyes.

Or maybe that's just me :P I love thinking about SMAP like this, I guess that's probably why I love writing fic for them XD

And no problem, I was just about to ask if I could friend you myself! :)

rz_jocelyn January 23 2010, 10:21:53 UTC

XD Trust me when I say that it's not just you. I'm with you on that one. I've always seen Takuya to be the disciplinarian of the group, and this role seems to be especially clear when it comes to his relationship with Tsuyoshi. Just as he protects and defends Tsuyoshi because Tsuyoshi is one of his own, he also pushes Tsuyoshi to be the best that he can be and doesn't cut him any slack. Tsuyoshi reciprocates this by admiring him and striving to prove himself in Takuya's eyes. It's as if he doesn't want to disappoint Takuya because he knows that Takuya believes in him.

But then, their dynamics change when its just the two of them, away from SMAP. Haha... In their SMAPxSMAP batsu games, they were so cute because Tsuyoshi was totally acting like Takuya's younger sibling (especially in the one where they had to climb Mt Fuji with Tsuyoshi being so hungover and Takuya being so hyper XD).

Of course, this might all not be true, but as fangirls, we can always dream, can't we? ;D

And, if all else fails, there's always fanfiction. ROFL!

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25lalalee36 January 25 2010, 02:41:48 UTC

geez.I think it's first fanfiction that made me cry like a little brat... the way you built it up is amazing and it the gradation as well...
I'm really looking forward your next piece

rz_jocelyn January 28 2010, 11:20:58 UTC

*bows* Thank you for your review! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. :D Ganbarimasu!

goblinbrodie January 27 2010, 02:10:06 UTC

You know, it's amazing it hasn't been done yet, but now you've written something that needed to be written - a fic about Tsuyoshi's scandal. You've treated it very sensitively I feel, and your exploration of how he told each member seemed true to character.

I like this part: "If there was one thing that Kimura-kun admired above all else, it was a person who gave their all to whatever they did." Now that's true - because it's something Kimura takes pride in himself.

I actually liked the Japanese dialogue, too. Sometimes I have the problem that I'm imagining a scene in my head, but when I come to write it down I realise I'd imagined the dialogue in Japanese... and then it just doesn't translate quite right. It's quite confusing.

rz_jocelyn January 28 2010, 11:34:00 UTC

Arigatou! :D I'm glad that you enjoyed the characterizations, especially with Takuya.

And, I'm glad that the Japanese dialogue came out okay. :D I completely empathize with your confusion. I was actually struggling with the dialogue in this fic. After I had written it, I realized that the English translation didn't quite carry the meaning and the tone that I was going for. I really debated on changing it because it would mean that there would be a mixture of Japanese and English dialogues, but then I decided that I really needed those particular lines to come across as emotive as possible because they were integral to the fic (especially Takuya's "yoku ganbatta"), so this was the final result. XD

nickusya April 20 2010, 06:37:01 UTC

It's really awesome! Arigatou for this ♥♥♥
I really enjoyed it, and it touched me so much that now I'm sitting here sobbing, because it's so real, all these emotions, tense, fear and finally acceptance, and all the warmth from all the members - it's great, hontoni :))

rz_jocelyn April 23 2010, 05:00:00 UTC

Arigatou gozaimasu! *bows* I'm really, really glad that you enjoyed it. XD

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rz_jocelyn June 28 2010, 01:07:03 UTC

*bows deeply* Arigatou gozaimasu! XD I'm really, really glad that you liked it. Your comments have been a real encouragement to me. :D Ganbarimasu!

Takuya and Tsuyoshi... These two have always fascinated me. Get me started and I could ramble on for hours. *smiles sheepishly* ♥

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rz_jocelyn June 28 2010, 13:23:59 UTC

XD XD XD It's nice to know that we're in the same boat. ROFL! ♥

On Takuya and Tsuyoshi: I wonder too; how did they work it all out? I mean, if you look at them now, you can just sense the closeness despite their contradicting characters. Takuya is just so protective and caring when it comes to Tsuyoshi (Takuya is always like this with all his friends though ♥). There was this one time, Tsuyoshi wanted a camera that Takuya owned, and Takuya searched high and low for another one so he could buy it for Tsuyoshi as a gift. On the other hand, Tsuyoshi always has this admiration of Takuya, and he always has complete faith in him. <3 ( ... )

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