Always Ch4 ~finale~

[ryunuka]

ALWAYS - CHAPTER IV

Holding the phone to his ear as he walked Tatsuya listened to the rings on the other end of the line, counting them as he waited for Kame to pick up.

“Moshi moshi, Uebo? What’s up?” Ueda stopped walking, standing perfectly still and closing his eyes.

“I give up Kame,” he said quietly.

“Eh? What do you mean? Are you

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[deirdre_diuran]

SPOT!!
I have to go write kinky KoTego first, but I'll be right back to read this!! XD

[deirdre_diuran]

*couldn't resist reading and gave up on KoTego and now wants to go cry in a corner*

Can I go cry in my corner? *sniff*

thanks so much for this, short but sweet and beautiful, ne please keep writing!

[ryunuka]

-hands you lots of big tissues-
I'm sorry it's so sad. I'm glad you liked it anyway, thanks so much for reading and commenting~! ^_^

[deirdre_diuran]

*takes them gratefully*

lol somehow, this role reversal is very strange XD I'm too used to being in the author spot after Snow Petals xD

[holly_berri]

omg im gonna cry~~~ *sobs*

im a complete sucker for all things angsty and ueda related~ and your amazing writing abilites makes this a hundred times better <3

thanks so much~ will be waiting for next part!

[ryunuka]

-hands you tissues-
I can see a lot of people will be crying...I feel very evil right about now, but in my defense I almost cried just writing it :S
Thank you, I'm really happy you liked it, even though it was so sad.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting~! ^_^

[messyboo]

i cried...this is so good, the way you kept me guessing whether it is tat-chan or koki that died...and becaus i love ueda so much, i ended up crying...even at the end of his life tatsuya keep thinking of koki, which make it a lot sadder...thank you for this, angsty fic always make me teary especially if it's a good one^^

[ryunuka]

-hands you lots of tissues-
I'm sorry my fic is so sad, but that's just the way it had to written, it wouldn't have worked if he hadn't died -feels evil and mean- :(
Thank you so much for reading and commenting~! ^_^

[snow_meow]

Tat-chan died because of hypothermia? O_O
Now that is interesting.

This fic as much as it is angst, it was well written.

[ryunuka]

I didn't want it to be suicide, mostly because that would be way too obvious, and also because I don't belive for minute the real Ueda would do that...even though the rest of this fic is pretty unreal :S
Glad you liked it, thanks for reading and commenting~! ^_^

[chrisrenheb]

So sad and beautiful.
That's how hypothermia is very sneaky and subtle.
Poor Kame had no idea what had been happening and yet he was dragged into it.
Koki has alot to atone for in memory of Ueda.

[ryunuka]

I feel bad for Kame too, getting dragged into their fight, but the rest will take care of him.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting~! ^_^