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It's Like a Room

Jul 02, 2011 12:55

Title: It's Like a Room
Author: ryouseiteki
Rating: PG-13
Word count: Approx 700
Characters/Pairing: Dean and Claire, Castiel/Dean
Warnings/Spoilers: None
Summary/Prompt: Teenage Claire tells Dean what Castiel's love for him is like, as an angel.

A/N: Was taking a shower and this popped into my head. Yeah, I don't even know.

( “You don’t even know, do you?” Dean wanted to look away, but Claire’s gaze held his. The same laser intensity, those eyes the same electric blue as her father’s... )

supernatural, fic, it's like a room

Comments 14

mstormi July 16 2011, 02:06:30 UTC

This is very powerful. I liked it alot!

ryouseiteki July 16 2011, 02:48:21 UTC

Thank you! I'm really happy you liked it.

seolforan July 16 2011, 03:47:36 UTC

Holy crap. For such a tiny fic that packed a punch. I must learn how to do this - speak so powerfully in such small of a space.

I'm quite impressed. *bows*

ryouseiteki July 16 2011, 16:58:50 UTC

It was originally even shorter; all I had was Claire speaking, but then I thought that there needed to be a bit of context hahaha.

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ryouseiteki July 16 2011, 17:01:04 UTC

*hands you a tissue*

I think he'd be a bit weirded out and awkward around Cas the next time they're together, and maybe try to think of a way to get the angel to stop because he doesn't think he's worth it.

cousinmary July 16 2011, 04:46:40 UTC

very nice :)

ryouseiteki July 16 2011, 17:01:30 UTC

Thank you!

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ryouseiteki July 16 2011, 17:03:20 UTC

*grinning really hard right now* It makes me so happy that the imagery was able to affect you in such a way, thank you so much for letting me know!