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It's Like a Room

Jul 02, 2011 12:55

Title: It's Like a Room
Author: ryouseiteki
Rating: PG-13
Word count: Approx 700
Characters/Pairing: Dean and Claire, Castiel/Dean
Warnings/Spoilers: None
Summary/Prompt: Teenage Claire tells Dean what Castiel's love for him is like, as an angel.

A/N: Was taking a shower and this popped into my head. Yeah, I don't even know.

( “You don’t even know, do you?” Dean wanted to look away, but Claire’s gaze held his. The same laser intensity, those eyes the same electric blue as her father’s... )

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Comments 14

wicked_liz July 16 2011, 07:15:01 UTC

Really intense, really beautiful. Claire's description is really emotive, and you really get the sense that Cas' devotion is something she can barely articulate.

ryouseiteki July 16 2011, 17:06:41 UTC

Thank you so much for the comment! I was experimenting a little with this fic and your thoughts have been an inspiration, I've re-read them many times already.

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ryouseiteki October 24 2011, 19:14:22 UTC

Thank you for reading and replying!

Also your icon is really recognizable, I notice you all over the place. XD ♥

mozzarellaroses October 24 2011, 14:06:20 UTC

Oh. Wow. No words.

ryouseiteki October 24 2011, 19:17:06 UTC

Thank you for reading and replying, your comment made my morning!

Apparently I did something right with this ficlet; I hope my future work is as powerful as this one happened to be. :)

mozzarellaroses October 24 2011, 22:50:13 UTC

<3 Like someone else said in the other comments, it's very powerful indeed.