[Fic] You're mine - Nishikido Ryo x OC [8/8]

[ryodokkun]

Ryo didn’t talk after all. Everyone knew what had happened but Ryo didn’t say one word. He wasn’t able to go into his room and so he stayed over at Yoko’s room. He didn’t fell asleep the whole night but he dammed up his tears. All the others felt really bad although it wasn’t their fault. Ryo wanted them to leave this night. Of course it wasn’t Ryo

Comments

[tiethel]

erm... well... sorry for calling you an asshole *ashamed*, I actually have a bad temper, really bad.

for the ending I am happy that his father did found his long lost son and protected him. you see a have a thing for father son relationships.

for yamapi I am so dissapointed in him. after all ryo had to rush over to his friend and save his sorry ass. If I was in ryos place after this lovely incident I wouldnt talk to him, my so called "best friend".

and yusei didnt suffer at all -.-

summarizing it; I liked your story but
1-I would like to see ryos inner demons more
2-pi was really an idiot, I cant quite get why ryo is still friends with him.
3-after all these things yusei did he didnt suffer at all.
and P.S: Eito rocks :p
well these are my honest opinions.
thank you for your fic

[decemberpie]

This fic was really good, but I somehow agree... ^^''
Everything went so fast.

Epilogue, pleeease???

*chu*

[mika_nobuta]

It is a nice end.
But i think Yamapi get not realy a brain!

Ist is noct nice, but i'm happy that Yusai go to hell!!!
^^

I hope i can find a new FF from you!

*hug*
*chu*

[rippal_is_love]

wie angekündigt...noch n comment von mir XD

ich müsst eigentlich schon schlafen *krank bin*
wollt eigentlich auch nur ein kapi lesen, aber daraus wurden dann halt paar mehr und jetzt bin ich durch... =D"

das ende...also ich find das mit dem papa war a bissl komisch, also dass der auf einmal ankommt...aber na ja, immerhin is so die sache mit der schlimmen kindheit bissle bereinigt XD

gegen mehr ryopi-happy end hätt ich sicher auch nix gehabt, v.a. weil pi ja echt ma n bissle arg beschränkt war in der fic, aber mei...man kann ja net alles haben :P

würd mich aber trotzdem noch über nen epilog freuen :3

danke fürs fleißige posten jedenfalls! ♥

[cipherstar]

YES! he died..but Yusei didn't really suffer huh? :P

Yay! to Ryo's father and eito of course..the heroes ^^

and Pi, you're a total baka! Pi is sooo blind through out the story.. *sigh

and it's good that everything's fine now for Ryo..eventhough it'll never be the same for him..

thanks for the fic.. ^^

[droot]

Oh poor Pi! He is a real idiot in the whole story!
It's so great Ryo's father is back! I didn't expected that at all! I was so happy when reading it! xD
And finally Ryo won't have to fear Yusei anymore! Yay!
That was a great fic! Thank you! ^^