Fic: Spiraling

[ryeloza]

Title: Spiraling
Pairing: Ben/Leslie
Word Count: 3100
Rating: PG-13
Summary: This is an ancient kink meme prompt that basically boils down to this: during Go Big or Go Home, Leslie and Ben get involved in a game of "seduction chicken" and things spiral out of control from there.
A/n: I started writing this back in January and have been fiddling

Comments

[shornt]

UM EXCUSE ME IF WE CAN'T PRESSURE YOU INTO AN R RATED SEQUEL THEN I GIVE UP AT THIS FANDOM

THAT WAS A RUDE PLACE TO END THIS

Holy god you write tension SO WELL. This was just plain hot and not a lot even happened, jesus. So many lines I loved in this. "Cute nemesis says what?" heeee, but also that big about how anger can be just as pulling as affection, because YES, oh god.

If you don't continue this I swear to god I SWEAR TO GOD

(Pleaaaaaase? For meeee? Remember that time you cancelled our New York plaaaans? DOES GUILT WORK WITH YOU?)

[ryeloza]

Yeah, I knew ending it there was going to be an unpopular decision. I promise to finish if I can actually figure out what I want to happen next. Though the guilt thing usually works too.

Thank you so much for all the kind words.

[c00kie]

God the tension in this is so good. I really love this era of their relationship and you did such a good job with it.

But seriously, where is the porn?!!!!

[ryeloza]

Sometimes I feel as though my ability to write smut has fled forever. But if there ever is another part, I promise it will be R-rated.

Thank you!

[americnxidiot]

Cute nemesis say what?

Oh my goooosh this is so tense and sexy and sweet. Indignant 3x01 Leslie who has no idea what she's getting herself into. Also I'm thirding (maybe fourthing by the time I click this?) that you write more in this time line because I would absolutely read the next million words of this story. Thanks so much! I missed your writing :)

[ryeloza]

Thanks! I've really missed writing fic.

[emilyla]

I read this in the car and laughed out loud at Cute nemesis say what?, causing me to admit to my husband I was reading fic. Not the first time this has happened with one of yours. You write tension so, so well, and this was just delightful as always.

[ryeloza]

Yay! Hearing that something I wrote made someone laugh is one of my favorite compliments. Thank you so much!

[ryeloza]

I apologize because scroll bar anxiety is the worst.

Thank you! If I can get my act together, I will definitely write a second part for your b-day.