Fic: Spiraling

[ryeloza]

Title: Spiraling
Pairing: Ben/Leslie
Word Count: 3100
Rating: PG-13
Summary: This is an ancient kink meme prompt that basically boils down to this: during Go Big or Go Home, Leslie and Ben get involved in a game of "seduction chicken" and things spiral out of control from there.
A/n: I started writing this back in January and have been fiddling

Comments

[ashisfriendly]

Agreed with Caity up there, the tension here is fantastic. It's palpable, I feel it in my fucking BONES. I think I told you that when I read this the first time. You are always good at tension but that was like the point of this fic so I think it just is like PAY ATTENTION EVERYONE HERE IS HOW IT'S DONE.

AN R RATED SEQUEL IS A MUST. I WILL DO ANYTHING TO MAKE THIS HAPPEN.

I could have read them dancing for hours. Seriously.

This killed me: “You’re right.” He leans into her, forehead pressed against hers, and she shuts her eyes. “Is that what you want to hear, Leslie? You’re right and I’m wrong?” Literally dead. BENNNN.

Please always write. I mean if you want to write a weekly fic for us, I mean, I'm sure we would all be ok with that.

[ryeloza]

I already owe you a huge debt of thanks for convincing me not to abandon this story forever and now I will have to add in how absolutely grateful I am for this comment. THANK YOU!!

[ralchica09]

This was fantastic! Funny, sexy, tension-y. Please, please, please write a naughty sequel!!

[ryeloza]

Thanks! I'm going to try to come up with something.

[spunkyar]

This was perfect. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time and then you end it with an even more perfect kiss. I love this time in their relationship. They hate each other, but you can see their lust right under the surface. :)

[ryeloza]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

[courtknees1]

Sooooo good! Ahh, it's always nice to have a flashback to these days. I loved the part where they blurred into neutrality and just became two people trying not to dance too awkwardly... the way you phrased that was lovely. And of course, the kissing was excellent. More kissing I say.

But really, part 2 would just be the icing on an already delicious cake.

(who doesn't love icing?)

[ryeloza]

Thank you! I'm going to try to come up with a second part. We'll see.

[craponaspatula]

I can't breathe.