Summer Time - 14

May 23, 2008 07:54

Rating: No idea where this might end up so let's be safe. NC17 
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fredsmith518 May 22 2008, 22:14:43 UTC
But Sandy and Kirsten treating him as one of their own children meant more to him than any amount of money ever could.
love that and the connection you show between Ryan and Sophie and Ryan acknowledging how important, as you replied last chp, they all are to him and him not being prepared to give them up

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ryanforever May 22 2008, 22:18:53 UTC
Thanks fred,
I was a bit concerned about how this chapter would be received because nothing really happens. But I thought that it was important to try to understand the reasons behind Ryan's behaviour. He knows that he's seriously attracted to Summer but he also knows that giving in to the attraction will cause even more problems with the Cohen's and he's not prepared to risk that. They mean too much too him. The poor boy is being torn in all directions.

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fredsmith518 May 22 2008, 22:21:30 UTC
heh! I'm always writing chps where nothing happens:) I liked the introspection

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ryanforever May 23 2008, 01:18:24 UTC
Yeah - but you're good at it. I end up tying myself in knots.

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katwoman76 May 22 2008, 22:14:51 UTC
He wanted it to be just for her.
And it had to be special.
Aw Ryan, you silly guy,
The perfect present for Summer is so easy to find.
Just put a bow on your own (preferably naked) body and wait for her on your (shared) bed so she can have her way with you in any way that she wants. See - easy and perfect. *smirk*

This was a very interesting chapter with Ryan revealing so much of his thoughts and about how things went so bad between him and Seth. Thanks for the insight view.

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ryanforever May 22 2008, 22:25:19 UTC
LOL

Summer would ceratinly enjoy that. (Wouldn't we all.)

But I'm supposed to have just shown you why it won't be that easy for him. But after a few drinks, who knows what might happen?

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katwoman76 May 22 2008, 22:27:53 UTC
But I'm supposed to have just shown you why it won't be that easy for him.
Yes, you did. In a very believable way and with describing Ryan very in character. But a girl can still dream, right? ;)

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ryanforever May 23 2008, 01:22:02 UTC
Dream away. I'll be with you.

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jazzyjackrabbit May 22 2008, 22:24:32 UTC
I definitely enjoyed it. It's nice to know how things progressed.

And I wonder what Ryan is going to buy for Summer, and more importantly: if it's going to lead to something... ;)

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ryanforever May 23 2008, 01:09:09 UTC
I figured that you needed to know the how and why of what happened between Seth and Ryan. It's going to be important in the times to come.

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60schic May 23 2008, 00:22:11 UTC
You've painted such a lose/lose situation for Ryan. I am anxious to see how you will bring future happiness to Ryan's life. You will....right?

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ryanforever May 23 2008, 01:07:24 UTC
Surely you know me better than that?

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occhic321 May 23 2008, 02:34:54 UTC
wow Ryan cleary has tons to worry and think about.

It was nice to get this background info.

Post soon,
- Sarah

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ryanforever May 23 2008, 08:41:05 UTC
He is a disturbed little woobie at the moment. But things are going to change. For the worse and the better.

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