Tough Like A Bullet Shell

[ruthiestump]

Title: Tough Like a Bulletshell
Author: ruthiestump a.k.a me. :)
Pairing: None yet.
Rating: R for swearing.
Warning: NONE
Disclaimer: FICTION which means fake.
Summary: In the desert right outside Battery City, You'll do anything to survive even if it means doing something you do want to.
A/N: My first Killjoy fic and because I'm slow, it isn't beta'd. :( I

Comments

[anonymous]

I read this on dust_verse last night but I couldn't find the post for it today so I hope you don't mind my leaving a comment in your lj

Thank you.

[ruthiestump]

Thank you for the advice and criticism. it's really helpful especially with your questions.

Some questions you have are already answered, not in the story but in my head as I was writing it. I guess it doesn't really make sense to post a story when I have all the answer to myself.

If I do plan to post more chapters, I will obviously take your questions into consideration and answer them or make an livejournal post about it. (I need to make more Non-fic journal posts. :) )

Thank you for leaving your support and advice.

[ext_933716]

So I read this last night but my internet went out and it was 3 am so I didn't feel like getting out of bed and switching the modem on and off...Anyhow, for constructive criticism purposes, I think that you should try and first think about the point of view you want it in and try to stick with it. I have trouble with this when I write essays to be honest. But, it's kind of difficult to follow along when you read something with "I" "Me" and then it changes to "Her" and "She". It's kind of just a little thing that probably every one at some point has had troubles with. I think that's just something I began to notice within my writing as well haha. Otherwise...I really like this. I never thought too much on a back story, even though I know there's one for every CD of MCR's. It's intriguing (: Oh and I definitely like her nickname :P.