25

[amatalefay]

Author: Amata le Fay

Title: 25

Story: Ether Lands (RP)

Flavor(s): Cranberry (Tarot Bunnies) BINGE

Toppings/Extras: Whipped Cream, Pocky Chain

Rating: PG13 (trigger warning: parental death)

Word Count: 2,400

Notes: Each year of Josu Gaman's life before he became Asher Lang. Concrit very much welcome.

Comments

[rainechan]

"In the name of Nai the Science Guy?"

That part totally made me grin. XD

Nicely done! I enjoy snippets, and these were awesome. :)

[amatalefay]

As soon as we figured out the science god's name there had to be that pun. No questions asked. :D

Thank you for reading! Snippets are so fun.

[blackflamingo77]

Oh wow.

I love watching the progressing of his life in all these little snippets. Each one says a lot not only about his character, but about his family and the world too. I know you aren't solely responsible for the worldbuilding of this universe, but you're still doing a wonderful job weaving it all in so seamlessly.

Parts of it were hilarious (Nai the Science Guy? I laughed so hard my sister accused me of being crazy. Again.), but it was also very serious and sad. I think my favorite of the bunch was "Strength". So, so much in just two sentences. The ending was perfect, too.

I think I've fallen in love with this universe. More please? ;)

[amatalefay]

Thank you so much! I love this universe, too, and try to write as much as I can to expand it. I always love doing snippets and working on the whole "less is more" philosophy. Thanks again!

[sirwynai]

Oooh, a very cool use of the prompt set. :D