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Cloves #11 with whipped cream

Mar 02, 2014 23:30

Author: Blossomdreams
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: Cloves #11 (pushing up daisies)
Story Arc: Pleasant Surprise
Title: Clues
Toppings: whipped cream (Adam is about 11-12), butterscotch
Summary: Adam learns more about the human with his dad.
Word count: 342
Notes: Hello everyone! I got one in! I'm hoping to keep up with it and work on my own stuff again ( Read more... )

[challenge] cloves, [author] blossomdreams

Comments 6

farfaraway2014 March 3 2014, 04:37:46 UTC

That's really sweet :)

I like the last line.

blossomdreams March 3 2014, 07:27:13 UTC

Thank you! They're a very sweet family. :)

I'm glad the last line worked out. ^_^

nathskywalker March 4 2014, 11:00:28 UTC

aww that's cute :)

blossomdreams March 7 2014, 15:40:16 UTC

Thank you! They're very adorable. :)

rustydragonfly March 9 2014, 17:47:48 UTC

Aww. Sorry Adam, humans are just weird like that. I think he has a point, though, "tossup" does sound like it could be a euphemism for death when you think of it.

blossomdreams March 9 2014, 19:55:45 UTC

Thanks it was one of the words I thought would confuse a paranormal person if they saw it. Tossup could be another euphemism for death. It's something I didn't think about, but you're right. I can see it.

Funny to notice this when writing. ^^