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Huckleberry and Coffee

Aug 27, 2012 09:08

Author: Bitz
Title: A Line Crossed
Rating: Teen
Huckleberry #26. don't judge a book by its cover
Coffee #5. purse
Topping/Extra: N/A
Story: Take Two and Call Me in the Morning
Summary: Hikaru makes an incorrect assumption about his new receptionist.
Word Count: 830
Characters: Aija, Hikaru, M'Kya

( Here I thought you were professional... )

[author] bitz, [challenge] huckleberry, [challenge] coffee

Comments 2

amatalefay August 27 2012, 15:04:11 UTC

Good for Aija, standing up for herself in such a poised manner. People making assumptions is one of my biggest berserk buttons, and probably one of hers as well. The dialogue in this piece--especially Aija's monologue near the end--was great, and you did a good job contrasting M'Kya and Aija with their manners of speaking. Nicely done!

bitty1721 August 27 2012, 16:29:01 UTC

Thank you so much! It's so sad, the stereotyping in life these days and sometimes, somebody has to set somebody else straight to let them know it's not always that way. Aija has just seen and heard enough of that to last her a lifetime.