Comments | runaway_tales: eyes on the prize

nathskywalker in runaway_tales

eyes on the prize

Mar 15, 2012 11:23

Author: Nathalia
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: Candy Bar Crunch #10 - eyes on the prize
Extras / Toppings: malt (summer challenge 425: women are the only ones who can fake it)
Word Count: 284
Story: Misfits
Summary: Jane really hates her undercover job.
Notes: I think some of you remember Doyle. I think I figured out how he fits into the whole story (though I ( Read more... )

[author] nathalia, [extra] malt, [challenge] candy bar crunch

Comments 11

roisin_farrell March 15 2012, 18:14:30 UTC

This whole piece was just so creepy. Poor Jane.

nathskywalker March 15 2012, 18:25:12 UTC

The fact that Doyle gets around a lot in the Misfits verse (Jane, Shirley, Hobbie) probably doesn't make it better. He is a creep, yeah.

ichthusfish March 16 2012, 05:38:07 UTC

Ugh :( This is the most slimeball Doyle's ever come across as, I think. He probably thinks her reaction at the end is a good one as well. Hurry up Dennis!

nathskywalker May 5 2012, 22:56:57 UTC

I think you're right. In prison, he's much nicer for some reason.

hi_falootin March 16 2012, 05:48:58 UTC

that has to be up there with one of the worst jobs to have to do :P but this was a nice piece...you got a lot across in pretty few words!

nathskywalker May 5 2012, 22:57:32 UTC

Thanks. This is mostly short because I had trouble writing Doyle. It's been so long and he turned into more of a jerk while I wasn't looking.

(The comment has been removed)

nathskywalker May 5 2012, 22:56:14 UTC

Doyle is a complete villain. There are times when I think I like him but then I remember that he's a jerk.

shayna611 March 20 2012, 19:24:51 UTC

poor Jane

Doyle's idea of an apology is priceless.

nathskywalker May 5 2012, 22:58:22 UTC

Doyle really needs to learn that that's now a way to apologize.