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Dec 16, 2011 20:51

Title: Meeting
Story: Tempus Edax Rerum
Characters Kimberly, Steven
Flavours: Strawberry #19 [Umbrella]
Toppings: Butterscotch [Remember the time]; Gummy Bunnies - 500themes #139 [Guardian]
Extras: N/A
Word count: 460
Rating: G
Summary: She ran into a warm body and fell back, the umbrella twirling before it dropped into a puddle.

Meeting )

[inactive-author] luna, [topping] gummy bunnies, [topping] butterscotch, [challenge] strawberry, [challenge] chocolate gelato

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bookblather December 17 2011, 01:41:51 UTC
Jamacia honestly sounds really nice. I hope Kimberly likes this guy, and that he's trustworthy. Also, I feel a bit bad for Tavor... there's something ominous about being anywhere for life. Good job!

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luna_moonsilver December 18 2011, 00:56:04 UTC
Oh, I know, right? I'm seriously hating on December at the moment ¬¬. Still, Steven taking Kim to Jamaica will certainly go a long way to her liking him!

Tavor is going to be stuck there for a while as well, poor thing. He should get away eventually, though.

Thanks! :)

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ichthusfish December 17 2011, 04:06:31 UTC
I really like the rain descriptions of the first, and the fact that she's always late. Hopefully Steven is as nice as he sounds. Jamaica sounds much better than rainy England (or freezing cold England, as it is right now). I'm glad Etan left Tavor his bread :)

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luna_moonsilver December 18 2011, 00:58:42 UTC
Ah, thank you! :D Yeah, I wish I was in Jamaica... it won't even snow here, it's just being cold D: Steven shouldn't turn out to be too bad for Kim, though. He's just got to work out how to deal with her (though taking her to Jamaica will help a bit!).

Heh, poor Tavor. I couldn't take his bread away from him after his horrible day... it'd just be too cruel ;)!

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luna_moonsilver June 8 2012, 00:07:12 UTC
Ha, it'll have at least dried Kim out! And poor Tavor; I just looked in the index and realised I wrote this piece for a challenge and never mentioned him again (including the connection he has to my other characters -_-). But yeah, life doesn't get much better for the guy.

Thank you! :D

no worries... I imagine I'll be commenting all over yours in the next few days, so look out for that ;)

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