Sea Salt 3, Cherry Vanilla 18: water doesn't break it heals

[bookblather]

Title: water doesn't break it heals
Main Story: In The Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Sea salt 3 (lake/pond), cherry vanilla 18 (flashback), My Treat (Danny doesn't have much to be nostalgic about, but she always remembers this.), malt (rusty's candy prompt: "I know this may seem boring, but I think the boring stuff is what I remember the most

Comments

[toxic_fairie]

Love it! Great use of alliteration, I'm a big fan of e.e. cummings myself. As for genre suggestions...meh, I'm worthless at that! But I really enjoy your experiments in them ^^

[bookblather]

I gotta say, I'm having a lot more fun than I thought I would. Genre-bending is fun. And thank you so much!

[bookblather]

ee cummings is great for imagery, even (especially?) if it doesn't always make sense. Thank you!

You can has! "forgive us,o life!the sin of Death" --ee cummings

[nathskywalker]

Modern prose-y poem thing? I really don't know but love the imagery. It works so well and it does indeed remind me of Danny when most of the time, it's hard for me to associate a character with a poem.

Candy?

[bookblather]

idk, I'm fond of "whatever the hell ee cummings does" myself. Thank you so much, and I'm glad you think it works!

Candy! when god lets my body be, ee cummings

[bookblather]

ee cummings is SO MUCH FUN. And I'm kind of fond of "whatever the hell ee cummings does" as a genre title, myself. XD

Candy: "the singing reaches of /my soul /spoke /the green" -- ee cummings

[hi_falootin]

lovely! I especially liked the "not tears" line

is there still candy? :)

[bookblather]

Thank you very much!

There is indeed still candy!

"Never had Heaven seemed quite so high,
Never had earth seemed quite so green,
Never had the world seemed quite so clean
Or sky so nigh."

- ee cummings