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Sea Salt 3, Cherry Vanilla 18: water doesn't break it heals

Oct 06, 2011 20:23

Title: water doesn't break it heals
Main Story: In The Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Sea salt 3 (lake/pond), cherry vanilla 18 (flashback), My Treat (Danny doesn't have much to be nostalgic about, but she always remembers this.), malt (rusty's candy prompt: "I know this may seem boring, but I think the boring stuff is what I remember the most ( Read more... )

[challenge] cherry vanilla, [extra] malt, [topping] whipped cream, [challenge] sea salt, [extra] pocky, [inactive-author] bookblather, [topping] cherry

Comments 12

ichthusfish October 8 2011, 03:34:29 UTC

Wow! Lovely! Really love the last pair of lines. Nicely done =D

[declines the candy]

bookblather October 15 2011, 03:58:31 UTC

Thank you very much! The last pair of lines are my favorite, too.

sarcasticsra October 19 2011, 11:40:50 UTC

Seriously, you are so good at things like this. Very evocative, and oh man, that "not tears not tears not tears" line--perfect. Great job.

Candy, please? :D

bookblather October 24 2011, 02:00:31 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm quite proud of myself; I didn't think I was going to be decent at ee cummings, but surprise.

Candy: it may not always be so;and i say by ee cummings.