FOTD, Sea Salt 1, Poached Pear 12: Fox Hair and Sea Eyes

Oct 03, 2011 23:19

Title: Fox Hair and Sea Eyes
Main Story: In The Heart -- EPIC PIRATE AUFlavors, Toppings, Extras: FOTD (billow: rise or roll in or like a great wave; surge, to swell out, puff up, etc., as by the action of wind, a great wave or surge of the sea.), sea salt 1 (ocean/sea), poached pear 12 (fortune & glory), malt (SC 310: "I don’t want to live where ( Read more... )

[topping] chopped nuts, [extra] malt, [challenge] sea salt, [inactive-author] bookblather, [extra] fresh fruit : pineapple, [challenge] poached pear, [topping] cherry, [challenge] flavor of the day

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bookblather October 5 2011, 04:33:03 UTC
I will definitely continue in this style! I find I love fairy tale writing. Can't say for certain if it'll be this particular story, though. More likely to be the kitsune story (thanks again!).

Lollipop for you: “Fairy tales are more than true; not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.” ― G.K. Chesterton

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walkwithheroes October 4 2011, 03:26:33 UTC
Oh, wow. I love the descriptions and details in this. It's such an awesome fairy tale. Love it!

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bookblather October 5 2011, 04:33:12 UTC
Thank you very much!

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bookblather October 5 2011, 04:33:26 UTC
She fits surprisingly well, doesn't she? Thank you very much!

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kay_brooke October 4 2011, 17:23:06 UTC
Oh, lovely language, gentle and yearning at the same time. This has such a great fairy tale feel to it.

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bookblather October 5 2011, 04:33:31 UTC
Thank you so much!

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sarcasticsra October 19 2011, 11:49:52 UTC
And again with the pretty! You have such a way with this style. It seems just...effortless. Wonderful work.

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bookblather October 24 2011, 00:47:00 UTC
Far from effortless, sadly, because I love writing this way but it is SO HARD. Ah well, there shall be more! Thank you!

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