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dani_california in runaway_tales

Fudge Ripple, Mocha, and Cranberry with Cookie Crumbs Milkshake plus Smoothie

May 06, 2011 19:46

Author: Nikki and Kelly
Edited/Beta'd by: Kelly
Challenge: Kiwi #10 (bite the bullet), Mocha #13 (when I get my hands on you), Cranberry #7 (The Lovers)
Toppings/Extras: Cookie Crumbs ( Babies Everywhere), Milkshake (Kelly owns Diana, Jade, and Xavier, characters from their story Polyfaceted.), Smoothie
Word Count: 638
Rating: PG-13
Notes: Takes place in ( Read more... )

[inactive-author] nikki, [extra] smoothie, [topping] cookie crumbs, [challenge] cranberry, [challenge] kiwi, [inactive-author] kelly, [extra] milkshake, [challenge] mocha

Comments 5

bookblather May 7 2011, 03:48:46 UTC

Oh, man, lol! Oh Kurt. His brain tends to stop working when he gets big shocks, doesn't it? I wonder how he reacts when he finds out they're having two. Great job.

dani_california May 8 2011, 01:57:38 UTC

They BOTH freak out a little bit at the twins thing. Chloe actually tells the doctor, "But I only wanted one for now!"

Thanks for reading!

subluxate May 7 2011, 07:16:00 UTC

Aww, Kurt, Ilu. These are actually reactions I was imagining while writing the other!

dani_california May 8 2011, 01:56:58 UTC

See, I told you he was written perfectly! :D He is probably my favorite of all the spouses, tbh.

Thanks for reading!

smoothiegarten May 9 2011, 00:34:38 UTC

:P Chloe opening that conversation with "Can you do CPR on yourself?" was absolutely priceless. Good thing he didn't have to! They're going to be great parents, I'm sure.