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micaxren in runaway_tales

First post in while

Jan 10, 2011 15:04

Story: Space Beyond Us
Rating: PG
Summary: Ran's past and present all in one piece.
Flavors/Toppings: Cinnamon Raisin Prompt 25:the road to hell is paved with good intentions
A little Topping: whipped cream- Ran is 16 as opposed to 22
Topped with fresh blueberries (All power tends to corrupt and absolute power corrupts absolutely. Great men are ( Read more... )

[challenge] cinnamon raisin, [topping] whipped cream, [extra] fresh fruit : blueberries

Comments 2

kaitygirl88 January 10 2011, 20:32:24 UTC

Holy crap, that is one hell of a bad nightmare/memory. D:

"Father's ideas are as useless as he is now." I particularly liked this line because I thought it wonderfully summed up how (I imagine) Tilnik feels about his family. He seems like he's all about number one, and to hell with anyone and everyone that gets in his way, including his own brother. Poor Ran. He deserves that drink! XD

micaxren January 11 2011, 17:10:41 UTC

Tilnik, by now, does only care about expanding. For his race's sake of course. Tilnik is only about 14 when he rules so he only thinks of the imediate affect. Thus he thinks war is the only way to get noticed and make progress. Even though there are better ways, they take too long for him.
I should write more on him to show the progression of his madness. :P
Thanks for the comment. :D
Ran and Pyth end up drinking the most of the crew for some reason or another. X)