Onecount - Chocolate Chip Mint #19, Sour Apple #28

Sep 14, 2010 17:09

I've decided to start updating more frequently, with one or two pieces per post. So no more slogging through four- or five-counts, at least not for now. :P

Author: Thai
Challenge: Chocolate Chip Mint #19 - ambiguous, Sour Apple #28 - you took the words right out of my mouth
Rating: PG
Story: blood princess
Timeline: Motherhood arc
Word Count: 291

twenty-four. the blades of apologies are hard to forge, but when rejected, their edges become keen. )

[challenge] chocolate chip mint, [challenge] sour apple

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thaizertazerll September 16 2010, 05:29:24 UTC
♥♥♥♥♥

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thaizertazerll September 16 2010, 05:33:53 UTC
Weirdly enough, one of my best friends asked me how she killed Oriana this weekend. B| Apparently the murder of an innocent human girl is cool.

But, y'know, despite all the raaa associated with it, it's not really Oriana's death itself that's so important to the story. It's how her death, or really the fact that Asma killed her, affected Asma's relationships with pretty much everyone around her, and the circumstances that led up to it. Hana plays a large part in the relationship fiddlage, too, although I really do need to write more of her.

Thank you for reading! ♥ I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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bookblather September 15 2010, 06:04:21 UTC
Awww, this is so bittersweet, heavier on the bitter. I like that Asma is trying to make amends in her own way, even if she can't make them completely. It makes my lower lip wobble. Nice job.

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thaizertazerll September 16 2010, 05:35:49 UTC
I like my bitter-bittersweet, lol. XD; *passes tissue for the lipwobbling*

Thanks for reading! ♥

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kay_brooke September 15 2010, 14:20:26 UTC
Oh, this is very sad. I need to read more from this story.

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thaizertazerll September 16 2010, 05:36:55 UTC
Most of the blood princess pieces are quite sad. Because apparently I am an angstbucket. B|

Thank you for reading, and I'm glad you liked it! ♥

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