Licorice, Rocky Road, Fudge Ripple, Hot Fudge, and Cookie Crumbs

[nitha_ni]

Author: Nitha
Story: Speechless
Challenge(s): Licorice #14 - Leave them alone and they'll come home, Rocky Road #4 - Alley, FotD - Acedia (Sloth)
Extra(s)/Topping(s): Hot Fudge, Cookie Crumbs
Rating: G
Word Count: 631
Summary: Introducing Ian
Notes: So, Ian is actually a character that was born from an AU on this storyline that I've been playing around

Comments

[nothingtoregret]

Eeeeek... oh dear. :s

I liked Ian's thoughts, particularly the bit about one out of three not being bad! And I loved the descriptions of the buildings and how Ian amuses himself. If I fall over something invisible on the pavement now, I'll probably feel a bit paranoid...

Are you planning on writing up your AU thoughts too? :o

[nitha_ni]

Hehehe, I probably will be a bit paranoid too ^_^

I actually am planning on doing the AU once it really gains a full story-line. Right now I have characters and differences in interactions, and some fun little scenes, but no real story line at the moment. It will slowly work itself out, but I'm not in a hurry. I have enough real storyline to get through still!

[aproberts]

hehehe That would be fun. Or maybe it's just Ian's pov that makes it seem fun.

[nitha_ni]

I think Ian's POV helps some :-)

[bookblather]

Uh-oh. Didn't run quite fast enough there, Isaac. Can't wait to see what's going to result from this. Definitely an ominious feel about those last two words.

[nitha_ni]

You get a little of the aftermath in the second link up top, but the full aftermath is something I'm planning on writing, just haven't gotten to it yet ;-)