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Carrot Cake 7, Coffee 3: Sensual

Jul 18, 2010 00:13

Title: Sensual
Main Story: In the Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Carrot cake 7 (touch), coffee 3 (bed), cherry (descriptive weirdness).
Word Count: 1206.
Rating: R. So remember how I said "Here Is" would be the closest I'd come to smut? I lied.
Summary: Ivy and Gina meditate on each other.
Notes: July 17th is The International Day of Femslash! ( Read more... )

[challenge] carrot cake, [inactive-author] bookblather, [challenge] coffee, [topping] cherry

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bookblather July 18 2010, 13:44:25 UTC

Well, now there is. Technically it's fandom-only, but my original fiction counts if I say it counts, and really I just wanted an excuse to write me some Gina/Ivy. There is more of them coming, don't worry: I went to my cousin's wedding yesterday and came away with a page and a half of notes on Gina and Ivy's wedding, but there's a couple of pieces I have to write before some of it will make any sense, so yes. There's stuff coming.

gandolforf July 18 2010, 15:36:13 UTC

This was very, very good. I love the descriptions, and the way each short bit shows how well Ivy and Gina fit with each other, into each other's lives. Wonderful writing.

bookblather July 23 2010, 18:30:44 UTC

Thank you very much! Descriptions are my weak spot, so I'm glad you enjoyed them especially.

chex_fics July 18 2010, 17:17:05 UTC

Ahh, this was wonderful - I really love these two ^_^

I especially like that last line.

bookblather July 23 2010, 18:31:16 UTC

Me too. :D They started this whole bloody universe, so they will always have a special place in my heart. And I'm glad the last line worked; it felt very summary to me. Thanks for reading!

hi_falootin July 18 2010, 20:18:44 UTC

Great concept and I love seeing in your character's heads like this! There's obviously a lot of love between these two and it really comes through.

The last one I liked especially ♥

bookblather July 23 2010, 18:32:05 UTC

Oh, excellent. I wasn't sure the sixth-sense one would work (either it wouldn't, or it would get "I see dead people" jokes), but it seems to be a favorite, so. Thanks very much for reading!

smoothiegarten July 19 2010, 23:40:33 UTC

Using a different sense for each section was a lovely idea, and I like how different they are while still staying connected. The very last is my favorite, and incredibly sweet. Awwww, Gina. It took her a while, but she found the right girl.

bookblather July 23 2010, 18:32:41 UTC

She did, even through occasional epic romantic screwups of which we will not speak. I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!