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Carrot Cake 7, Coffee 3: Sensual

Jul 18, 2010 00:13

Title: Sensual
Main Story: In the Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Carrot cake 7 (touch), coffee 3 (bed), cherry (descriptive weirdness).
Word Count: 1206.
Rating: R. So remember how I said "Here Is" would be the closest I'd come to smut? I lied.
Summary: Ivy and Gina meditate on each other.
Notes: July 17th is The International Day of Femslash! ( Read more... )

[challenge] carrot cake, [inactive-author] bookblather, [challenge] coffee, [topping] cherry

Comments 21

sarcasticsra July 18 2010, 01:00:23 UTC

Oh. Oh. This is completely gorgeous and wonderful and perfect, and I love it to pieces. Seriously, Gina and Ivy. You are adorable and awesome.

bookblather July 18 2010, 13:39:06 UTC

I think they're my only couple that gets together right off and bloody well stays together, despite anything and everything, and I just. I love writing them so much. So this was fun. :D I'm glad you loved it just as much! Thanks for reading!

askingxalice July 18 2010, 01:17:09 UTC

Well, this hasn't at ALL inspired me to write some Jakob/Oz stuff.

Seriously, this is just... what Sara said. Wonderful and perfect and /awesome/ and - God, I love them.

bookblather July 18 2010, 13:39:57 UTC

YAY JAKOB/OZ. Which is not to say that I don't love Andy/Oz just as much, I do. I just like me some Jakob/Oz. and think that Jakob/Andy/Oz would be awesome I mean what

That is to say. Thank you very much for reading, and for all your compliments!

ichthusfish July 18 2010, 03:14:25 UTC

Very sweet! I liked the way you swapped back and forth between the two perspectives, it works really well, and that you got all of the six senses in. Nicely written :)

bookblather July 18 2010, 13:40:44 UTC

Oh, thank you. I wasn't sure that the perspective-swapping would work; this was originally concieved as being from just Ivy's POV, but Gina insisted she have her say to, so there you have it. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading.

darkfaerieclaw July 18 2010, 05:40:56 UTC

I really hoped you'd do something for International Femslash Day, and you did. My day is made. <33

That said, I adore this. It's so gorgeous that it's nearly poetry, and Ivy and Gina's thoughts on each other are fantastic - that you used the senses was an awesome move. Every time I read about these two, I'm given more reasons to love them, both separately and together. I like that.

I'm adding this to my memories. Just so you know.

bookblather July 18 2010, 13:41:56 UTC

I was always planning to, and I might actually have posted it on International Femslash Day were it not for the fact that Portugese weddings go on ALL DAY. But! It's the thought that counts, right?

Thank you! I was a little worried about the poetical aspects of it. That's what I claimed the cherry for, and it's what I'm not very good at, but I'm glad that it worked out in the end, and memories? Seriously? *is flattered as hell* Thank you so much!

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bookblather July 18 2010, 13:43:07 UTC

I'm not very good at descriptions normally, so I put a crapton of effort into these, and I'm glad it paid off. :D It was just. It was so much fun to write, and I'm so glad it worked for you. Thanks for reading!