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kei17 July 18 2013, 17:13:34 UTC
JUST SCREAMS
AND BASICALLY DIE.

THIS WAS AWEOSMSESZTSTTAYAYTASYGZGSSG

T.T

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mapofwords July 22 2013, 14:27:15 UTC
Thank you! ;A;

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yeolie July 18 2013, 20:17:03 UTC
WOW PERFECT
I loved everything about this
Gr8 characterizations, all the homosexual tension, girls!!!
It flowed very naturally and realistically.

I esp. like your chan. He's super aware of ppl yet still such an idiot. Like yess exactly.

My fave part is when chan calls baek in boracay. The way baek is happy to talk, but distracted, and chan is expecting so much more.
I also screamed when chan decided to go after hyejeong like nooo you asshole.
Also, the faaaanservice.

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mapofwords July 22 2013, 14:28:49 UTC
I was worried about my decision to write the entire fic in Chanyeol's perspective, so you liking him a lot makes me really happy.;; Thanks for your lovely comment! (The fanservice parts are some of my favorites.)

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hunhamburger July 18 2013, 20:55:00 UTC
This was actually perfect oh my god.
I loved how they had this tension throughout the entire fic, and the way you portrayed chanyeols confusion about how he feels towards baekhyun was really well done.
I really loved this ;~;

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mapofwords July 22 2013, 14:43:07 UTC
Just. Thank you for your lovely comment! I'm happy you enjoyed this. :)

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loudestoflove July 19 2013, 02:59:45 UTC
ooh i really liked this!! i absolutely loved the bite to chanyeol and baekhyun's friendship, their relationship seemed really real in a way that was both sweet and sharp. i liked the way that chanyeol kept pushing, because even if he knew it was hurting baekhyun he's always been a bit of a bulldozer and he doesn't have the common sense to stop going for what he wants. i was also pleased that both of them are also into girls?? i really liked that baekhyun was genuinely into hyejeong (HYEJEONG!!!!) and the rest of the group too, kyungsoo being able to talk to girls!! sehun wants to go on wgm (maknae pls), jongin trying to scold chanyeol, trying to break joonmyun but just making him fond desperate!! i just really enjoyed this

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mapofwords July 22 2013, 14:46:11 UTC
I don't know how to reply to lovely comments properly sobbb. But just know that I really appreciate your words!

I've always imagined Chanyeol as a whirlwind in everything and Baekhyun being the steadier person. And you can't have real world fic without girls lmao (or we might as well not exist kekeke), so I'm glad you liked that aspect of the fic.;;

(P.S. Everyone wants to break Suho's shell, everyoneeee.)

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minwhore July 19 2013, 03:29:06 UTC
HOLY SHIT WHAT IS THIS FIC I AM DYING
THE FLUFF
AND THE FRUSTRATION
AND THE CHARACTERIZATIONS HOLY WOW

i am waiting eagerly for reveals just so i can push you off a cliff for all of the feels you put me though omfg ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

"I'd love to be on the show," Chanyeol says, smiling his most charming smile, "but the thing is I'm already married." He pats Baekhyun's thigh pointedly.
FUCK MY LIFE SOBS

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mapofwords July 22 2013, 14:48:21 UTC
...Oh no. The authors have been revealed. Does this mean you're going to push me off a cliff now? D8 'Cause I kind of like being a live. Soooob. Maybe you can revive me afterward.

(Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad you found the fic capslock-worthy haha.)

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