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endlessdrums November 16 2009, 18:53:56 UTC
Oh, this was brilliant. Totally and utterly fantastically brilliant! Well done!

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rude_not_ginger November 16 2009, 18:57:40 UTC
Thank you!

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quitehomoerotic November 16 2009, 19:05:26 UTC
I know I've told you, but I wanted to tell you here too; this captures his emotion during that scene just perfectly. It's an entirely believable portrayal of just exactly what his thought processes are, and it hooks you right in. The last line is utterly chilling considering how he turns and what it does to him.

I utterly love this. <3

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hystericblue42 November 16 2009, 20:20:01 UTC
I couldn't have said it better myself :)

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rude_not_ginger November 16 2009, 21:16:59 UTC
Thanks!

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rude_not_ginger November 16 2009, 21:16:36 UTC
Thank you so much for reading this over for me! <3<3

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rude_not_ginger November 16 2009, 21:17:21 UTC
Thank you!

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aliengeekgirl November 16 2009, 19:57:44 UTC
This is utterly brilliant. The thought processes behind his actions that make him change.

Best thing I've read about it so far.

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rude_not_ginger November 16 2009, 21:18:00 UTC
Thank you so much! <3

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trillianastra November 16 2009, 20:00:57 UTC
There are tears in my eyes right now. That was... beautiful. A perfect representation of what he must have been thinking.

thank you.

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rude_not_ginger November 16 2009, 21:18:31 UTC
*hands tissues*

Thank you!

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