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Oct 30, 2010 17:45

FANDOM: MERLIN

Title: The Beginning in the End (2/2)
Word Count: 10, 458 (this part), 16,688 over all (yikes!)
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Character death, bad writing...

SPOILERS this is my take on what the spoilers for the end of season 3 might mean, so there are definite POTENTIAL SPOILERS within. However, it is all pure speculation on my part, so ( Read more... )

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misseri44 October 31 2010, 16:22:05 UTC
This was really good, and i wonder what would the writers of Merlin think if they read it now, once they've filmed the finale for the show, they should have used your idea, every spoiler we've seen or read clicked in your story and the ending, at first i didn't think it could happen, but i suppose it's the way Arthur would react towards Merlin, even after knowing that he saved his life.

Have you thought on writing a fic on Merlin out of Camelot and how or if he gets back??

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ruby_caspar October 31 2010, 20:03:31 UTC
Ha, funny you should say that, but by the time I'd finished this the sequel was fully-formed in my head! I'm probably gonna start writing it tomorrow.... I'm a slave to the plot-bunnies.

Thanks so much - I'm really glad you liked it, and this was a really sweet comment!

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misseri44 November 1 2010, 17:00:52 UTC
Good!! I really want to know whether Merlin would be accepted again in Camelot or not, but i guess many of his friends (like Gwen or Gwaine) would have something to say about that

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sparkly_oats October 31 2010, 19:23:47 UTC
Oh man - I really hope you're behind your computer writing a sequel to this because I read that waaaaaaaaay too fast. I loved your pacing, the characters were spot on and you found this cool balance between comedy, romance & action which is making me think you're secretly a writer for the show. Or you know, should be one very very soon. This was epic. Absolutely loved the knighting scene, Merlin's angsty confession and of course all the Gwen/Arthur interactions. You must write a sequel, this was just too good! :)

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ruby_caspar October 31 2010, 20:09:04 UTC
Ah, wow, thank you! That comment really made me smile!! :D I'm really happy you liked it and yes... there will be a sequel. It was formed in my head by the time I'd finished this...

Thanks again! :D

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prmarie October 31 2010, 20:52:38 UTC
This was amazing! It's well-plotted and exciting, but still romantic and emotional. Good work!

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ruby_caspar October 31 2010, 20:55:39 UTC
Thank you! Really glad you liked it - thanks for the comment :)

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marindamar November 2 2010, 14:15:36 UTC
Whoa. If this is “bad writing”, as you indicate in your warnings, I hope I never read something "good" from you - it would probably kill me, since THIS already left me so breathless ( ... )

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ruby_caspar November 2 2010, 22:41:37 UTC
Wow. I mean - just wow, thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked it and thank you so much for the insightful feedback! I agree with everything you say about the show, especially Merlin and Arthur. I don't think the show would ever split the two of them up (physically, at least) for more than an episode or so, since their relationship is the lynch-pin of the entire series, but I agree that it would be really interesting to see. They say that there will be big changes for next season - I really hope that Arthur finding out about Merlin is one of them, as I want the writers to leave themselves enough time to actually explore the changes that would bring to their relationship dynamic, and I worry they won't. I do think Morgana will end up going rogue (how could she not) and I think that she, at least, has to know about Merlin before she leaves... I'm so excited for the end of the season ( ... )

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sgmajorshipper November 6 2010, 18:12:02 UTC
No idea why you don't have more comments, because this thing is EPIC. I just got around to reading it, and wow. Your characterizations are awesome, and the storyline is so perfect.
Simply BRILLIANT! :D

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