What Edmund did over his summer vacation

[rthstewart]

Blocks and general downer attitude notwithstanding, as I'd gone so far, I have finished and tied together the pieces previously posted here into a full update to Harold and Morgan:  Not a Romance.  Chapter 4 is here, and about half of it is old-ish (though edited) and about half is new content.  Please review if you are so inclined.  Feedback

Comments

[rthstewart]

Thank you! Good luck with your writing!!

[autumnia]

I read, I laughed and I very much enjoyed it.

And I also left a review afterward. :-)

[rthstewart]

Thank you! Some of that census did end up in the story! Of course, then I added the references to the Calormene Kama Sutra.

[therck]

I love Edmund and Morgan together. I'm hoping for happiness for them.

Thanks for posting! I really enjoyed the chapter.

[rthstewart]

Thanks so much!

[min023]

Yay, I came and read and left a (baddish) sort of review (for which, my apologies - my tech is being a pain in the butt. If it doesn't start behaving soon, I'm going to start explaining my pov with a hammer! : )

Anyway, I'm very thrilled to see the update.

Cheers

[rthstewart]

Thanks so much! I soooo appreciate it! You have no idea how heartening it is, especially given the very, very, very, very slow response.

[varnafinde]

I'll review it on ff later - I'll just say here that I loved it!

I was so pleased when you apologized for half of it being old material - then I knew that half of it would be new!!!

[rthstewart]

Thank you so much! I hope you do RR when you get a chance, and yes, there's lots of new material there! Added context!!