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Fic: Unconditional

Mar 27, 2008 19:31

Title: Unconditional
Author: pinkhairedauror
Format & Word Count: Ficlet, 610 words
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: 24, two wolves in each of us story
Warning: Self-conflict and almost surrender to the beast inside.
Summary: Spending time with the werewolves makes Remus' struggle against being the wolf that's inside harder each day, each time when Fenrir ( Read more... )

prompt 24, pinkhairedauror

Comments 4

carnivalgirl March 27 2008, 23:27:30 UTC

I like how conflicted this is, it's got a really bitter edge to it with all the crossings outs (love them), questions and of course the "He. Would. Find. A. Way...". You can really imagine him saying that through his teeth. It's also nice to see him thinking positively about her faith in him, rather than trying to dismiss her.

pinkhairedauror March 28 2008, 11:07:33 UTC

Thank you very much! I am glad you liked, and thanks for reading and taking the time to review :)

tegdoh March 28 2008, 20:45:12 UTC

Excellent use of the prompt. The internal struggle Remus has against the beast seems very realistic--and his reasons for not giving in even more so.

pinkhairedauror March 31 2008, 06:29:56 UTC

Thank you very much! I am glad it reads reasonably and makes sense, for the character.