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Family Ties Part One

Mar 23, 2008 10:22

Title: Family Ties Part One (of Two)
Author: jesspallas
Format & Word Count: 1709
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: 23 whole
Summary: Set in the Portalverse of A Little More Time: He saw it. He saw the answer in her eyes an instant before her lips parted and softly said again the words that had once rocked his world to its core.
Author's Note: This story is set within ( Read more... )

prompt 23, jesspallas

Comments 17

jonas72 March 23 2008, 11:33:18 UTC

English is not my first language, but i think it´s "pared down", not "paired down". Second opinions, anyone?

I liked that Remus has grown as a person, and that he knows it.

Looking forward to the second piece.

silver_ripples March 23 2008, 15:03:44 UTC

I still haven't got round to leaving a review of "A little more time" (bows head in shame), which I liked tremendously, but at least I will say a few words here. It is a lovely piece, sweet and full of hope. Now they will have a chance to bring up their baby like they always wanted :) I'm looking forward to Teddy's reaction.
Thank you very much.

fthpfthpfthp March 23 2008, 15:55:02 UTC

Your explanation of Remus slowly getting a grip on his feelings about being a werewolf: Made of win!

Your characterization of these two - the contrasts between them and the passion they both share for each other, for their careers, for life: Outstanding!

Remus's critical comments on the essays and James's prank: Creative!

The A Little More Time universe: *unintelligible squeeage*

I'm totally fangirling over your fics! Thank you! *writes "check f-list first thing" on calendar the 29th*

rahnee13 March 23 2008, 16:32:56 UTC

Woo hoo!

I'm so glad you are continuing the "Portalverse" as you so cleverly call it.

I really liked Remus' introspection and acceptance of himself and his condition finally, and that it was Tonks who played a big part in that.

I loved seeing Remus as a teacher! "Must try harder" had me rolling; it's wonderful how he is encouraging James.

Yay for more Lupin babies! I'm looking forward to part 2.

tegdoh March 23 2008, 16:35:54 UTC

I'll just add one more voice to the chorus: I really enjoyed ALMT (yea! for denial! fic, or in this case, canon-repairing fic), and I can't wait to read more.