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Family Ties Part One

Mar 23, 2008 10:22

Title: Family Ties Part One (of Two)
Author: jesspallas
Format & Word Count: 1709
Rating: PG-13
Prompt: 23 whole
Summary: Set in the Portalverse of A Little More Time: He saw it. He saw the answer in her eyes an instant before her lips parted and softly said again the words that had once rocked his world to its core.
Author's Note: This story is set within ( Read more... )

prompt 23, jesspallas

Comments 17

shimotsuki March 23 2008, 17:22:37 UTC

I was very happy to find this (even though I'm actually supposed to be writing, not reading, today!). As everyone's been saying, the descriptions of life at Hogwarts, and the idea of young James knocking himself out to prank Remus, are wonderful. (Must try harder -- *snort*) But my favorite thing about this story is that it gives Remus what I had most hoped canon would give him -- a chance to stop worrying, hiding, and denying himself things all the time and start to live.

I eagerly await the rest. I'm guessing that this time, Remus's reaction to the news will be a little different, heh.

otahyoni March 23 2008, 18:34:21 UTC

1. Aww, it's so nice to get a sort of "where they are now!" story after "A Little More Time." Yay for happy Lupins, all!

2. Hee! Pregnant! This is going to be fun.

merryb87 March 23 2008, 19:24:55 UTC

Oh yay! I was wondering if you were going to post anything within the portalverse, and you did and it made my day!

I loved it, it was very cute and I can't wait to see Teddy's reaction to the news thats he's going to be a big brother. Great job :)

pinkhairedauror March 23 2008, 19:53:57 UTC

... *hoots* OH YES!!

a. YAY for more ALMT!!! (Ahem, ok. YAY FOR MORE JESSPALLAS WORK...)

b. I love the many details that you put in. Including Remus appreciating 'a little more time' (alone) with his wife.

c. I couldn't stop laughing for about five minutes either. WELL DONE!

d. ... YAY and Awwww Tonks thinking it's all her fault and it's going to be so much of a problem to lose hair colouration!

e. TBC. My current most favourite abbreviation ever.

Can't wait!!

mrstater March 23 2008, 23:31:57 UTC

Birth control is just not Remus' and Tonks' friend is it? LOL I can't tell you how excited I am to see them deal with a pregnancy in these much happier circumstances, and in your very capable hands. This was a delightful easter egg.