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Prompt 5: The Sound of Silence

Mar 06, 2008 07:03

Title: The Sound of Silence
Author: summoning_muse
Format & Word Count: Ficlette, 757 words
Rating: PG-13 (barely)
Prompt: 5: Pablo Neruda poem
Warning: Hmmm....... Nothing, really.
Summary: She would burble, he would listen, and then a wonderful silence would fall over them, and she never wanted anything else more in the world.
Author's Note: Ehh, rushed. I'm falling ( Read more... )

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Comments 3

pinkhairedauror March 6 2008, 16:59:21 UTC

This is very, very lovely! I absolutely adore the balance you've reached for her, between the childish exuberance and the more... mature awareness. And exploits.

And yes. Another world sounds like a very good way to describe how those two are like, when together!

I enjoyed this a lot! ^_^

katyhasclogs April 13 2008, 21:00:07 UTC

I thought this was lovely. I beautiful fusion of funny and whimsical and thoughtful and romantic. So many moods in just one short piece - a really good little ficlet. :)

summoning_muse April 14 2008, 05:01:06 UTC

Ohhh, thank you! And THAT'S what this was about. I had thought about how from all my challenge fics, this was the one I had no memory of what it was about, lol.